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Write a minimum of 250 words You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of v.2

Write a minimum of 250 words The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of v. 2
Tremendous up-gradation has done in the field of automation from the past few decades. Nowadays people have easy access to the four-wheelers resulting in Jam-packed roads. Some people believe that this inconvenience created by increased usage of cars can be solved by ideas like the promotion of other modes of transports or the implementation of worldwide regulations. This essay will discuss how steps like the positive changes in rules and boosting usage of other vehicles can prove to be beneficial for these crises. Undoubtedly, In today' s world, people consider cars as a necessity more than a luxury. Whether it is traveling longer distances or nearby places, people prefer going into four-wheelers. This has raised a plethora of negative issues. Firstly, Degradation of the air quality in the areas where there is an increased use of automobiles. Air pollution has become a major concern in the current scenario which is increasing day by day by smoke released by cars. Secondly, the Common usage of motor cars created overcrowding of cars on roads which not only causes traffic jam but also noise pollution. Thirdly, the preference for private vehicles in spite of public transports. These are the major concerns related to the rise in the usage of cars and needs improvement. Furthermore, As a solution to this, some ideas like modification in rules and regulations should be done. For instance, in a few countries there is law-like one person can own one vehicle and odd-even rule of cars where one day all even number cars run on-road and another day odd one. Additionally, charges of tolls should be increased so that people must prefer public transport for longer journeys. In addition to all this, Substitute vehicles like two-wheelers and public transports should be promoted to cope up jam-packed roads. These Options may result in fruitful way. To recapitulate, It could be said that Although, Cars have provided comfort to mankind but with all these, it has some negative consequences too. Some laws and orders like the restriction of ownership, odd-even rule and rise in toll charges effectively made people opt another option in spite of being dependent on four-wheelers. Moreover, with the promotion of other transport and public vehicles some disadvantages shall be overlapped.
Tremendous up-gradation has done in the field of automation from the past few decades. Nowadays
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people
have easy access to the
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four-wheelers
resulting in Jam-packed roads.
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Some
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people
believe that this inconvenience created by increased
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usage
of
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cars
can
be solved
by
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ideas
like the promotion of other modes of
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transports
or the implementation of worldwide regulations. This essay will discuss how steps like the
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positive
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changes
in
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rules
and boosting
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usage
of other
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vehicles
can prove to be beneficial for these crises.

Undoubtedly
, In
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today&
#039; s world,
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people
consider
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cars
as a necessity more than a luxury. Whether it is traveling longer distances or nearby places,
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people
prefer going into
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four-wheelers
. This has raised a plethora of
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negative
issues.
Firstly
, Degradation of the air quality in the areas where there is an increased
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use
of automobiles. Air pollution has become a major concern in the
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current
scenario which is increasing
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day by day by
smoke released by
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cars
.
Secondly
, the Common
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usage
of motor
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cars
created overcrowding of
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cars
on roads which not
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only
causes traffic jam
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but
also
noise pollution.
Thirdly
, the preference for private
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vehicles
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in spite of
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public
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transports
. These are the major concerns related to the rise in the
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usage
of
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cars
and needs improvement.

Furthermore
, As a solution to this,
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some
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ideas
like modification in
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rules
and regulations should
be done
.
For instance
, in a few countries there is law-like one person can
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own
one
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vehicle
and odd-even
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rule
of
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cars
where one day all even number
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cars
run on-road and another day odd one.
Additionally
, charges of tolls should
be increased
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so
that
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people
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must
prefer
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public
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transport
for longer journeys.
In addition
to all this, Substitute
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vehicles
like
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two-wheelers
and
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public
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transports
should
be promoted
to cope up jam-packed roads. These Options may result in fruitful way.

To recapitulate, It could
be said
that Although,
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Cars
have provided comfort to mankind
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but
with all these, it has
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some
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negative
consequences too.
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Some
laws and orders like the restriction of ownership, odd-even
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rule
and rise in toll charges
effectively
made
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people
opt another option
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in spite of
being dependent on
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four-wheelers
.
Moreover
, with the promotion of other
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transport
and
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public
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vehicles
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some
disadvantages shall
be overlapped
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Write a minimum of 250 words The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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