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Write a letter to your friend who has just moved to a new house regarding a gift that you want to send him 1 what you will send as a gift 2 why you have chosen it 3 How you will send v.1

Write a letter to your friend who has just moved to a new house regarding a gift that you want to send him 1 what you will send as a gift 2 why you have chosen it 3 How you will send v. 1
NOWADAYS, INNOVATION IN THE SCIENCE FIELD IS SURGING TO MUCH EXTENT. HENCE, THIS PROCEDURES DEMAND A PLETHORA OF ANIMALS TO BE TESTED. THERE ARE CERTAIN FOLKS WHO BELIEVE THAT USING ANIMAL FOR THE TESTING ANY NEW FORMULA OR TREATMENT IS CONSIDERED AS A DETRIMENTALMACTION BY HUMAN LIKE SELFISH. THIS ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY OPPOSE THE THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO VARIOUS REASON WHICH IS DISCUSSED BELOW WITH RELEVENT EXAMPLE. FIRST OF ALL, DOING EXPERIENT ON ANIMAL MAY LEAD TO ECLINE IN THE NUMBER OF WILD ANIMAL COMMUNITY THAT IS MUCH ESSENTIAL TO MAITAIN THE ECO-SYSTEM OF THE ENVIRONMENT. FOR EXAMPLE, AS PER THE USA WILD-LIFE DEPARTMENT, 80% OF THE ANIMALS SENT TO THE LABORATORY LAST YEAR FOR TESTING NEW MEDICINE. THUS, SOME ANIMALS BECAME EXTINCT. THEREFORE, IT SHOULD BE BANNED TO USE ANIMALS FOR THE TRYING PURPOSE. SECOND OF ALL, AS HUMAN FEELS PAIN IN HURTING IN THE SAME WAY ANIMALS EXPERIENCES TOO. AND THIS KIND OF ACTIVITY SHOW THE CRUALTY TOWARD THE ANIMAL THAT IS NOT COUNTABLE WORK. FOR INSTANCE, AS PER THE VETENERY STUDY, 60% OF THE ANIMALS HAVE THE FEELING ND ATTACHMENT SAME AS HUMEN. IF WE HURT THEIR ONE OF THE FAMILY MEMBER, THEIR FAMILY GETS HURT AS WELL. HOWEVER, SOME SCIENTFIC METHODS CAN NOT APPLY ON HUMAN OR ANY OTHER BIRDS SUCH AS TRYING NE ANTIDOTS OF THE SEVERAL SERIOUS DISEASES LIKE CANCER. AS IT HAS MAJOR ADVERS EFFECT ON PERFECTLY FIT INDIVIDUAL AND DISEASED PERSON IS UNFIT FOR USING IT BEFORE ACCURATE RESULT. IN CONCLUSION, ANIMALS INDEED A MEDIUM FOR A HUMA TO MAKE SUCH EXPERENT SUCCESSFUL AS SCIENTIST. PERHAPS, ON E SHOULD NEVER USE THEM ABOVE THEIR LIMITS RATHER THAN FINDING A LTERNATIVE FOR SO. TO FIND THE ALTERNATVES, GOVERNMENT CAN HELP THOSE PEOPLE BY SUPPORTING THEM. THIS WAY, THERE WOULD BE NO HARM TO AN ANIMALS JUST FOR OUR SHAKE.
NOWADAYS, INNOVATION IN THE SCIENCE FIELD IS SURGING TO MUCH EXTENT.
HENCE
, THIS PROCEDURES DEMAND A PLETHORA OF
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ANIMALS
TO BE
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TESTED
. THERE ARE CERTAIN FOLKS WHO BELIEVE THAT USING
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ANIMAL
FOR THE TESTING ANY NEW FORMULA OR TREATMENT
IS CONSIDERED
AS A
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DETRIMENTALMACTION
BY HUMAN LIKE SELFISH. THIS ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY OPPOSE
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THE THE
ABOVE NOTION DUE TO VARIOUS REASON WHICH
IS DISCUSSED
BELOW WITH
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RELEVENT
EXAMPLE.

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FIRST OF ALL
, DOING
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EXPERIENT
ON
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ANIMAL
MAY LEAD TO
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ECLINE
IN THE NUMBER OF WILD
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ANIMAL
COMMUNITY
THAT IS
MUCH ESSENTIAL TO
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MAITAIN
THE ECO-SYSTEM OF THE ENVIRONMENT.
FOR EXAMPLE
, AS PER THE USA WILD-LIFE DEPARTMENT, 80% OF THE
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ANIMALS
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SENT
TO THE LABORATORY LAST YEAR FOR TESTING NEW MEDICINE.
THUS
,
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SOME
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ANIMALS
BECAME EXTINCT.
THEREFORE
, IT SHOULD
BE BANNED
TO
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USE
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ANIMALS
FOR THE TRYING PURPOSE.

SECOND OF ALL, AS HUMAN FEELS PAIN IN HURTING
IN THE SAME WAY
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ANIMALS
EXPERIENCES TOO. AND THIS KIND OF ACTIVITY
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SHOW
THE
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CRUALTY
TOWARD THE
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ANIMAL
THAT IS
NOT COUNTABLE WORK.
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE
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VETENERY
STUDY, 60% OF THE
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ANIMALS
HAVE THE FEELING ND ATTACHMENT SAME AS
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HUMEN
. IF WE HURT THEIR ONE OF THE FAMILY MEMBER, THEIR FAMILY
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GETS
HURT
AS WELL
.

HOWEVER
,
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SOME
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SCIENTFIC
METHODS CAN NOT APPLY ON HUMAN OR ANY OTHER BIRDS SUCH AS TRYING NE
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ANTIDOTS
OF THE SEVERAL SERIOUS DISEASES LIKE CANCER. AS IT HAS MAJOR
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ADVERS
EFFECT ON
PERFECTLY
FIT INDIVIDUAL AND DISEASED PERSON IS UNFIT FOR USING IT
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BEFORE
ACCURATE RESULT.

IN CONCLUSION
,
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ANIMALS
INDEED
A MEDIUM FOR A
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HUMA
TO
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MAKE
SUCH
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EXPERENT
SUCCESSFUL AS SCIENTIST. PERHAPS, ON E SHOULD NEVER
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USE
THEM ABOVE THEIR LIMITS
RATHER
THAN FINDING A
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LTERNATIVE
FOR
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SO
. TO FIND THE
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ALTERNATVES
,
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GOVERNMENT
CAN
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HELP
THOSE
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PEOPLE
BY SUPPORTING THEM. THIS WAY, THERE WOULD BE NO HARM TO AN
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ANIMALS
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JUST
FOR OUR SHAKE.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay Write a letter to your friend who has just moved to a new house regarding a gift that you want to send him 1 what you will send as a gift 2 why you have chosen it 3 How you will send v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
307 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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