People's social, personal and financial success is highly influenced by their cooperation experience. With this regards, I believe that it is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed for two following reasons: it enables people to broaden perspectives, and it strengthens competitiveness in the society.
Firstly, working as a team allows people to develop their cooperating skills. Working as a team opens up more opportunities to talk and interact with other people, divide necessary works, and also enables to collaborate with each other as a team. Through socializing with others, you get to encounter other cultures and traditions that may be unfamiliar to you. For example, when I was working with an American friend for a project, I learned various things that were different from me such as working style and communicating. This helped me to opened up my perspectives and thoughts. To sum up, working as a team leads you to broaden perspectives.
Next, working as a team strengthens competitiveness in the society. Last year, in the article "The Korean Herald", it was stated that 82% of people who had experience in working as a team were more competitive in the society. Some people said that working as a team taught them how to interact with other people. Moreover, several bosses that I had interviewed with have said that they prefer to hire people with more team working experience. This directly affects the competitiveness in the society. To conclude, these evidences show how working as a team leads to strengthening in social competitiveness, which ultimately leads to success.
Lastly, working as a team and having team working experiences is a huge factor in success. In conclusion, working as a team than as an individual is better to succeed for two reasons that were mentioned above.
People
's social, personal and financial success is
highly
influenced by their cooperation
experience
. With
this
regards, I believe that it is better to work as a
team
than as an individual to succeed for two following reasons: it enables
people
to broaden perspectives, and it strengthens competitiveness in the society.
Firstly
,
working
as a
team
allows
people
to develop their cooperating
skills
.
Working
as a
team
opens up more opportunities to talk and interact with
other
people
, divide necessary works, and
also
enables to collaborate with each
other
as a
team
. Through socializing with others, you
get
to encounter
other
cultures and traditions that may be unfamiliar to you.
For example
, when I was
working
with an American friend for a project, I learned various things that were
different
from me such as
working
style and communicating. This
helped
me to opened up my perspectives and thoughts. To sum up,
working
as a
team
leads you to broaden perspectives.
Next
,
working
as a
team
strengthens competitiveness in the society. Last year, in the article
"
The Korean Herald
"
, it
was stated
that 82% of
people
who had
experience
in
working
as a
team
were more competitive in the society.
Some
people
said that
working
as a
team
taught them how to interact with
other
people
.
Moreover
, several bosses that I had interviewed with have said that they prefer to hire
people
with more
team
working
experience
. This
directly
affects the competitiveness in the society.
To conclude
, these evidences
show
how
working
as a
team
leads to strengthening in social competitiveness, which
ultimately
leads to success.
Lastly
,
working
as a
team
and having
team
working
experiences
is a huge factor in success.
In conclusion
,
working
as a
team
than as an individual is better to succeed for two reasons that
were mentioned
above.