Working hours today are too long and people are not spending as much time as they should with their families or on leisure activities. What is your opinion on this? v.2
Working hours today are too long and people are not spending as much time as they should with their families or on leisure activities. What is your opinion on this? v. 2
Hardly a day goes by without the subject of working hours. Nowadays, it is very popular to be workaholic, since this can bring you a lot of money. However, I am absolutely sure, that out society have to work for its own future generations. For my opinion, we have to work, because we do not know what can be happened in the future, but for the other hand we also should find a time to take a rest to not to be mad after 10 years of non stop working.
Today, most of us live in huge cities, which are widespread for kilometers. That is why people have to spend almost all day in traffic jams, on tube for commuting. For example, having conducted a research among people from Japan, scientists have revealed that 70 % of them spend more than 5 hours on the streets to get to the jobs. After long working day, people got tired and can not have a talk with their own families.
Also, a lot of people know that they must work to feed the children, to save money for a rainy day. You need sacrifice your own interests and hobbies to get more money, do not made redundant. It is quite often that people go to the job which they are literally hate. For example, in 2017 it was reported in New York Times that every third man do not like his job.
Taking everything in account, it must be said that our society has become workaholic and we should change it as soon as possible to save us and our families.
Hardly a day goes by without the subject of working hours. Nowadays, it is
very
popular to be workaholic, since this can bring you
a lot of
money.
However
, I am
absolutely
sure, that out society
have to
work for its
own
future generations. For my opinion, we
have to
work,
because
we do not know what can
be happened
in the future,
but
for the other hand we
also
should find a time to take a rest
to not to
be mad after 10 years of non
stop
working.
Today
, most of us
live
in huge cities, which are widespread for kilometers.
That is
why
people
have to
spend almost all day in traffic jams, on tube for commuting.
For example
, having conducted
a research
among
people
from Japan, scientists have revealed that 70 % of them spend more than 5 hours on the streets to
get
to the jobs. After long working day,
people
got
tired and can not have a talk with their
own
families.
Also
,
a lot of
people
know that they
must
work to feed the children, to save money for a rainy day. You need sacrifice your
own
interests and hobbies to
get
more money, do not made redundant. It is quite
often
that
people
go to the job which they are
literally
hate.
For example
, in 2017 it
was reported
in New York Times that every third
man
do not like his job.
Taking everything in account, it
must
be said
that our society has become
workaholic and
we should
change
it as
soon
as possible to save us and our families.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes