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Without capital punishment (the dealt penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.2

Without capital punishment (the dealt penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. with this opinion? v. 2
Throughout the years, the issue of Death Penalty had always been present in our society. Many organizations stated facts and assumptions as to the extent of its essence in our society regarding security and crime regulation. The use of capital punishment depends on factors. First, the geological location; second, a nation type of government and lastly, the possible effect or its implication to our society. Safety of one' s belongings, including life, a family member, acquaintance is a top priority in Maslow' s Hierarchy of needs. This part study could be easily taken away from an individual due to rise of crimes devised by people who likes to do it the easy way and Capital Punishment was the method used by ancient humans with high profile crimes such as murder, rape, and robbery. It proved to be effective until the rise of the law. Still some countries permit this act such as the Muslim countries that added illegal drug activities to the equation. This was also used in the Philippines in late 1990' s where the most common convicts were rapists, a person named " Baby Ama" was trending then who raped his step daughter. Many more were punished and boy did it felt so right to the families of the afflicted. Faith, justice and equality; the three top ruling reasons for eviction of this law. It is stated in the fifth commandment " Thou shall not kill" . Religiously, this means that it is not up to humans to take it upon themselves to end one' s life, but up to God the creator. There are instances where forgiveness took place yet a better substitute for death penalty to their eyes was imprisonment. Aggravation or years served in jail depends on crime committed and seems more ethical to many. As I have seen on periodicals, news and my own eyes as I was a victim of robbery myself; serious implementation of the law must be done based from case to case. In my opinion, those who had the courage to kill a person, a group and done something hineous such as rape deserves to die as to it will not only be instilled as a lesson for those who want to commit such, it will also be a source of feeling safe by the individuals because there is " one less" that could scare them.
Throughout the years, the issue of Death Penalty had always been present in our society.
Many
organizations stated facts and assumptions as to the extent of its essence in our society regarding security and
crime
regulation. The
use
of capital punishment depends on factors.
First
, the geological location; second, a nation type of
government
and
lastly
, the possible effect or its implication to our society.

Safety of
one&
#039; s belongings, including life, a family member, acquaintance is a top priority in
Maslow&
#039; s Hierarchy of needs. This part study could be
easily
taken away from an individual due to rise of
crimes
devised by
people
who
likes
to do it the easy way and Capital Punishment was the method
used
by ancient humans with high profile
crimes
such as murder, rape, and robbery. It proved to be effective until the rise of the law.
Still
some
countries permit this act such as the Muslim countries that
added
illegal drug activities to the equation. This was
also
used
in the Philippines in late 1990' s where the most common convicts were rapists, a person named
&quot
; Baby
Ama&quot
; was trending then
who
raped his step daughter.
Many
more
were punished
and boy did it felt
so
right to the families of the afflicted.

Faith, justice and equality; the three top ruling reasons for eviction of this law. It
is stated
in the fifth commandment
&quot
; Thou shall not
kill&quot
;
.
Religiously
, this means that it is not up to humans to take it upon themselves to
end
one&
#039; s life,
but
up to God the creator. There are instances where forgiveness took place
yet
a better substitute for death penalty to their eyes was imprisonment. Aggravation or years served in jail depends on
crime
committed and seems more ethical to
many
.

As I have
seen
on periodicals, news and my
own
eyes as I was a victim of robbery myself; serious implementation of the law
must
be done
based from case to case. In my opinion, those
who
had the courage to kill a person, a group and done something
hineous
such as rape deserves to
die
as to it will not
only
be instilled
as a lesson for those
who
want to commit such, it will
also
be a source of feeling safe by the individuals
because
there is
&quot
; one
less&quot
; that could scare them.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay Without capital punishment (the dealt penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. with this opinion? v. 2

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396 words
5.5
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