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With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.4

With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 4
Books in the form of e-books are popularising day by day in the library systems. A significant number of people consider this as an optimistic, whereas, others do not. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of this trend will be discussed in the following paragraphs. On the positive side, the internet technology has completely revolutionised the public libraries in terms of storage, transportation and accessibility with the help of computers. The transfer of books is not a question anymore for the educational institutions as they can be transferred in the form of e-books, that' s the chief advantage. In addition to that, ebooks are mostly available free to access with some exceptions as compare to paper books, which always involve a cost to buy. Furthermore, every public institute has an issue of limited space to hold paper-based literature, which had been a serious concern until the introduction of online books. On the downside, eye protection is the biggest concern for the readers of computer books. This has been proven reading ebooks for a longer duration can have a negative impact on the eyes of a person. For illustration, during examination time, a student has to study for longer hours, thus studying constantly for longer duration has shown adverse effects on the eyes of the viewer. Therefore, it is advised to take short breaks during reading through online books. In conclusion, technical advancement has improved the access of books to every part of the world with almost zero cost involvement on the other side, it is advised not to read such e-books for a longer duration to save your eye vision.
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in the form of e-books are
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popularising
day by day in the library systems. A significant number of
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people
consider this as an optimistic, whereas, others do not. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of this trend will
be discussed
in the following paragraphs.

On the
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positive
side, the internet technology has completely
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revolutionised
the public libraries in terms of storage, transportation and accessibility with the
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help
of computers. The transfer of
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books
is not a question anymore for the educational institutions as they can
be transferred
in the form of e-books,
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to that,
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ebooks
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mostly
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some
exceptions as compare to paper
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books
, which always involve a cost to
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buy
.
Furthermore
, every public institute has an issue of limited space to hold paper-based literature, which had been a serious concern until the introduction of online books.

On the downside,
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eye
protection is the biggest concern for the readers of computer
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books
. This has
been proven
reading
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ebooks
for a
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longer
duration can have a
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negative
impact on the
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eyes
of a person. For illustration, during examination time, a student
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has to
study for
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longer
hours,
thus
studying
constantly
for
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longer
duration has shown adverse effects on the
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eyes
of the viewer.
Therefore
, it
is advised
to take short breaks during reading through online books.

In conclusion
, technical advancement has
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improved
the access of
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books
to every part of the world with almost zero cost involvement on the other side, it
is advised
not to read such e-books for a
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longer
duration to save your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
vision.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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