It has been observed that many individuals in the metropolitan cities live alone. Mainly these people are migrated from rural areas for their development and to find better opportunities. Which force them to survive alone in big cities without their families. In my opinion, this trend is leading a negative impact for the humankind.
People in metro cities are often living alone and spend most of their life in their businesses or jobs to collect money as much as possible for their family. These people are mostly from rural areas and travel thousands of miles to find better opportunities away from their family and relatives. Furthermore to support their family in an economical way. Although some of them get too addicted towards money and never return to home.
Moreover, the relationship with family members is most affected in their life. Staying away from their family and alone in the crowded cities can have an adverse effect sometimes to their brains and memories which results in the psychological effect. Because of these impact more suicidal and, isolation cases are observed in cities.
In conclusion, living alone in the crowded cities can help you financially but the social life of an individual is completely destroyed. People are money oriented nowadays, with this attitude to people will end up with psychologically hampered society. In the near future, the impact on family bonding will be the most.
It has
been observed
that
many
individuals in the metropolitan
cities
live
alone
.
Mainly
these
people
are migrated
from rural areas for their development and to find better opportunities.
Which
force them to survive
alone
in
big
cities
without their
families
. In my opinion, this trend is leading a
negative
impact for the humankind.
People
in metro
cities
are
often
living
alone
and spend most of their life in their businesses or jobs to collect money as much as possible for their
family
. These
people
are
mostly
from rural areas and travel thousands of miles to find better opportunities away from their
family
and relatives.
Furthermore
to support their
family
in an economical way
. Although
some
of them
get
too addicted towards money and never return to home.
Moreover
, the relationship with
family
members is most
affected
in their life. Staying away from their
family
and
alone
in the crowded
cities
can have an adverse effect
sometimes
to their brains and memories which results in the psychological effect.
Because
of these impact more suicidal and, isolation cases
are observed
in cities.
In conclusion
, living
alone
in the crowded
cities
can
help
you
financially
but
the social life of an individual is completely
destroyed
.
People
are money oriented nowadays, with this attitude to
people
will
end
up with
psychologically
hampered society. In the near future, the impact on
family
bonding will be the most.
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