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with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.3

with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 3
In recent years, the technology has changed the way we read by implementing an alternative to books. The demand for e-books in recent times have become increasingly popular as many individuals belive that this is the best step forward While others think that it has downsides. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this new trend. To begin with, looking at the advantages of e-books there is a sharp decrease in deforestation rates because of this technology. If this is continued forever, we can save the planet from cutting down of trees for the manufacturing of paper for books. Other positive is that one can carry thousands of materials in electronic devices without carrying books physically. For instance, students in secondary high school used to carry more books and now this has changed completely to e-books. Thus, there are more upsides of this new trend. On the other side of the argument, many think that it has negative impacts when compared to the advantages. These people have reasons to believe that because it is showing damaging to people's health. In detail, if one reads the e-books continuously for hours, it can show detrimental outcomes for people's health, especially on the eyes. As a result, many teenagers are facing catarct problems at a young age. Another disadvantage is that, by having e-books, one can miss the authenticity of reading books physically. Thus, it has a negative impacts on individual lives. To conclude, with the significant increase in e-books there is a sharp decrease in paper books. Although this technology has many disadvantages such as health problems, it can help save the planet from chopping down of trees. Personally, I believe the advantages of e-books outweighs the disadvantages.
In recent years, the technology has
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changed
the way we read by implementing an alternative to
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books
. The demand for e-books in recent times have become
increasingly
popular as
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many
individuals
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belive
that this is the best step forward While others
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think
that it has downsides. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this new trend.

To
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begin
with, looking at the advantages of e-books there is a sharp decrease in deforestation rates
because of this
technology. If this
is continued
forever, we can save the planet from cutting down of trees for the manufacturing of paper for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. Other
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positive
is that one can carry thousands of materials in electronic devices without carrying
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books
physically
.
For instance
, students in secondary high school
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used
to carry more
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books
and
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now
this has
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changed
completely to e-books.
Thus
, there are more upsides of this new trend.

On the other side of the argument,
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many
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think
that it has
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negative
impacts when compared to the advantages. These
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people
have reasons to believe that
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because
it is showing damaging to
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people
's health. In detail, if one reads the e-books
continuously
for hours, it can
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show
detrimental outcomes for
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people
's health,
especially
on the eyes.
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,
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many
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teenagers
are facing
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catarct
problems at a young age. Another disadvantage is that, by having e-books, one can miss the authenticity of reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
physically
.
Thus
, it has a
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negative
impacts on individual
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lives
.

To conclude
, with the significant increase in e-books there is a sharp decrease in paper
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books
. Although this technology has
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many
disadvantages such as health problems, it can
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help
save the planet from chopping down of trees.
Personally
, I believe the advantages of e-books outweighs the disadvantages.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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