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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.1

With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 1
In this era of technological development, people opt for electronic books rather than traditional books. Some individuals take this as a positive change due to their availability and easier scanning capabilities; however, other believes that this trend has detrimental effects. On one hand, there are numerous advantages of reading via e-books in comparison with paper books. Firstly, e-books are available to individuals at any time. People find it cumbersome to carry bulky books, especially when they are commuting to some other place and can read from e-books with just few clicks. For instance, smartphone and other electronic equipment including portable laptops and palmtops have made it possible to study anywhere and anytime. Secondly, scanning for any information is less time consuming from electronically available material, for instance, rather searching from all pages of a document, one can simply press CTRL+ALT or can type in search bar available on web pages for finding any desired information using smartphones, thus making e-books more advantageous. On the other hand, declining paper books over electronic books has certain disadvantages too. The most alarming drawback is that reading and focusing on material from phones adversely affect the eye sight. To illustrate, rays emerging from screen of electronic instruments could be hazardous to eye retina resulting in visual impairments. Moreover, due to astronomical escalating cost of mobile phones and laptops, impoverished people could not afford to buy such costly accessories, making them unable to read using e-books. Take, for example, a poverty stricken individual could not afford to buy a phone of worth $20, 000, merely to take advantage of reading from internet. To conclude, availability and easier scanning makes e-books more valuable. However, visual impairments and inaccessibility to unprivileged cannot be ignored.
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people
opt for
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electronic
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books
rather
than traditional
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books
.
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Some
individuals take this as a
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positive
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change
due to their availability and easier scanning capabilities;
however
,
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other
believes that this trend has detrimental effects.

On one hand, there are numerous advantages of reading via e-books
in comparison
with paper
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books
.
Firstly
, e-books are available to individuals at any time.
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People
find it cumbersome to carry bulky
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books
,
especially
when they are commuting to
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some
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other
place and can read from e-books with
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just
few clicks.
For instance
, smartphone and
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other
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electronic
equipment including portable laptops and palmtops have made it possible to study anywhere and anytime.
Secondly
, scanning for any information is less
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time consuming
from
electronically
available material,
for instance
,
rather
searching from all pages of a document, one can
simply
press CTRL+ALT or can type in search bar available on web pages for finding any desired information using smartphones,
thus
making e-books more advantageous.

On the
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other
hand, declining paper
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books
over
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electronic
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books
has certain disadvantages too. The most alarming drawback is that reading and focusing on material from phones
adversely
affect the
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eye sight
. To illustrate, rays emerging from screen of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electronic
instruments could be hazardous to eye retina resulting in visual impairments.
Moreover
, due to astronomical escalating cost of mobile phones and laptops, impoverished
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people
could not afford to
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buy
such costly accessories, making them unable to read using e-books. Take,
for example
, a
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poverty stricken
individual could not afford to
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buy
a phone of worth $20, 000,
merely
to take advantage of reading from internet.

To conclude
, availability and easier scanning
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makes
e-books more valuable.
However
, visual impairments and inaccessibility to unprivileged cannot be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignored
.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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