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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v.18

With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 18
There has been a consistent improvement in the popularity of electronic books, the effects of which have resulted in the decline of paper books. Many consider this as an acceptable trend towards development, while others, however, reject. This particular essay based on benefits and drawbacks of this trend, each of which is to be investigated further as follows. As regards the advantages of being commonly popular e-books, regardless of the negative effects upon paper books, it has sufficiently reasonable value which permits to be purchased by many. It is undoubtedly fact that paper books are more expensive as opposed to e-books. One particularly decent illustration of this would be the internet facilities through which every desirable book can be found irrespective of how rare it might be. Another useful aspect of e-book is the convenience of utilizing it in any place. To be more specific, paper books have to be carried wherever it goes, as long as user intend to use it, yet, electronic books have facilitated this inconvenience by solely placing it into mobile or computer software. Hence, this type of viable books is much enjoyed by readers. From another perspective, turning to the negative side of e-books, the utilizer of this book have confronted with detrimental lights, the cause of which give rise to loss of one’s vision. Apparently, mobile phones or computers have harmful lights to human’s eye. Furthermore, because of the electronic books, the value of reading books is noticeably deteriorated. In particular, if a book cannot engage readers interest he replace with the other and, as a result, reader can feel reluctant to finish the book when other more engaging ones are simply attainable. Thus, e-books are not merely have a damaging aspect to the reader, but also alter the book reader’s esteem towards book. Having acquainted with each of those sides, it can be concluded that e-books play a major role in the decline of paper books, however, it can be sufficiently convenient for many, whereas for others it may appear a negative trend.
There has been a consistent improvement in the popularity of electronic
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books
, the effects of which have resulted in the decline of paper
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books
.
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Many
consider this as an acceptable trend towards development, while others,
however
, reject. This particular essay based on benefits and drawbacks of this trend, each of which is to
be investigated
further
as follows.

As regards the advantages of being
commonly
popular e-books, regardless of the
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negative
effects upon paper
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books
, it has
sufficiently
reasonable value which permits to be
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purchased
by
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many
. It is
undoubtedly
fact that paper
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books
are more expensive as opposed to e-books. One
particularly
decent illustration of this would be the internet facilities through which every desirable
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book
can
be found
irrespective of how rare it might be. Another useful aspect of e-book is the convenience of utilizing it in any place. To be more specific, paper
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books
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have to
be carried
wherever it goes, as long as user intend to
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use
it,
yet
, electronic
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books
have facilitated this inconvenience by
solely
placing it into mobile or computer software.
Hence
, this type of viable
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books
is much enjoyed by readers.

From another perspective, turning to the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
side of e-books, the utilizer of this
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book
have confronted with detrimental lights, the cause of which give rise to loss of one’s vision.
Apparently
, mobile phones or computers have harmful lights to human’s eye.
Furthermore
,
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because
of the electronic
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books
, the value of reading
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books
is
noticeably
deteriorated.
In particular
, if a
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book
cannot engage readers interest he
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replace
with the
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other
and,
as a result
, reader can feel reluctant to finish the
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book
when
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other
more engaging
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ones
are
simply
attainable.
Thus
, e-books are not
merely
have a damaging aspect to the reader,
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but
also
alter the
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book
reader’s esteem towards book.

Having acquainted with each of those sides, it can
be concluded
that e-books play a major role in the decline of paper
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books
,
however
, it can be
sufficiently
convenient for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
, whereas for others it may appear a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
trend.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 18

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  American English
4 paragraphs
340 words
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