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with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.10

with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 10
There is an ongoing discussion about whether e-books will substitute the paper books. There are both merits and demerits from both sides. I am going to discuss the perspectives from both sides before coming to a conclusion that increase of e books is beneficial than physical books. On one hand, since ages, we have physical books. Physical books, play an important role in sharing knowledge to students and scholars. Reading physical books have many advantages. Take for instance, reading paper books make the eyes less stressful than e-books. Also across the world not all the books are translated into digital. As per the study of University Of Manchester, only 10% of all the books are converted as e-books. This clearly shows the need of physical books. On the other hand, e-books become popular day by day because of technological advancements. Sites like Scribd, amazon books become popular and reach out to the masses faster than the physical books. Even though, not all the books have their digital version, most of the books written in the recent decade have a digital version. Also, the main advantage of e-books is to save the environment as physical books use paper which is extracted from the tress and students also don't feel the burden of carrying books. For example, in japan a survey revealed that 70% of school children prefer e-books compared to paper books. Finally, by considering the above points, it's better to move to e-books as it saves the environment and remove the burden for children of carrying books. The government should take care of this and move all the existing books into digital books
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before
coming to a conclusion that increase of e
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physical
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.
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, play an
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important
role in sharing knowledge to students and scholars. Reading
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physical
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have
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many
advantages. Take
for instance
, reading paper
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make
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across the world not all the
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are translated
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University Of Manchester
,
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only
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are converted
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the need of
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On the other hand
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of technological advancements. Sites like
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Scribd
,
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amazon
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become popular and reach out to the masses faster than the
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physical
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.
Even though
, not all the
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have their digital version, most of the
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written in the recent decade have a digital version.
Also
, the main advantage of e-books is to save the environment as
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physical
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books
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use
paper which
is extracted
from the tress and students
also
don't feel the burden of carrying
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books
.
For example
, in japan a survey revealed that 70% of school children prefer e-books compared to paper books.

Finally
, by considering the above points, it's better to
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move
to e-books as it saves the environment and remove the burden for children of carrying
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books
. The
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government
should take care of this and
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move
all the existing
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books
into digital
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books
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IELTS essay with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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