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With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.2

With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 2
In recent years, the usage of e-books have risen in popularity over the alternative of paper books. While it is often thought from a positive perspective, some assume that as harmful. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such utilization. To begin with the positive, a crucial advantage that e-books are that they consume no raw material such as bamboo to produce one. This is because electronic books are stored as digital forms in the memory of the book readers and electronic devices; thus, no physical paper is required. In contrast, paper books promote the risk of bamboo extinction since papers are made with the use of bamboo, and mass production of it may encourage to bamboo deforestation. Besides reducing raw material consumption, e-books are also more space-friendly. As one small e-book reader can store thousands of e-books, they free out space for the bookshelves in the house. Nevertheless, electronic books do present some problems. For instance, to read the e-books, the device called e-books reader is required. Since e-books readers are very costly, it is no wonder that not everyone has the extra money to spend on those devices. Another significant disadvantage of the electronic form of the book is that readers should be familiar with cutting edge technology. Unlike with paper books, the technology utilized in the devices limits the accessibility of the e-books; thus, the elderly and other non-technical savvies may have limited access to the e-books. In conclusion, although e-books are beneficial in terms of reducing raw material consumption and saving space, it is important to consider that they can also be expensive and are arguably not as reader-friendly as paper books.
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books
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thought
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positive
perspective,
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some
assume that as harmful. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such utilization.

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with the
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positive
, a crucial advantage that e-books are that they consume no raw material such as bamboo to produce one. This is
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because
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electronic
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books
are stored
as digital forms in the memory of the
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book
readers and
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electronic
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devices
;
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, no physical paper
is required
.
In contrast
, paper
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books
promote the
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risk
of bamboo extinction since papers
are made
with the
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use
of bamboo, and mass production of it may encourage to bamboo deforestation.
Besides
reducing raw material consumption, e-books are
also
more space-friendly. As one
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e-book reader can store thousands of e-books, they free out space for the bookshelves in the
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.

Nevertheless
,
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electronic
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do present
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some
problems.
For instance
, to read the e-books, the
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device
called e-books reader
is required
. Since e-books readers are
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very
costly, it is no wonder that not everyone has the extra money to spend on those
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devices
. Another significant disadvantage of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electronic
form of the
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book
is that readers should be familiar with cutting edge technology. Unlike with paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, the technology utilized in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
devices
limits the accessibility of the e-books;
thus
, the elderly and other non-technical savvies may have limited access to the e-books.

In conclusion
, although e-books are beneficial in terms of reducing raw material consumption and saving space, it is
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important
to consider that they can
also
be expensive and are
arguably
not as reader-friendly as paper
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books
.
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IELTS essay With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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