With the increasing use of mobile phone and computer, the number of people who write letter has decreased. As a result, letter writing will disappear soon. Do you agree or disagree? How do you think letter writing is important？ v.1
With the increasing use of mobile phone and computer, the number of people who write letter has decreased. As a result, letter writing will disappear soon. How do you think letter writing is important？ v. 1
Due to the rapid increase in western culture, everyone is working hard to achieve a certain height, where an individual could be recognized, as a famous character, for instance, actors, actresses as well as sports stars. This brings a lot of fame and moreover, it could also be problematic sometimes. In my strong conviction, being a famous personality could be an amalgamation of advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, a human being puts its all the efforts to reach, at the heights of success and finally his hard work pays off. According to the study, published in the 2018 Edition, the writer highlighted some points, for illustration, he observed that many times the celebrities need not to stand in a queue or even wait for their turn, because they are so popular that, within a fraction of time their tasks are completed. Thus, providing them a great deal of advantage as per their fame.
Secondly, some famous personalities could even face problems in public, when they are socially active. To illustrate, an interview was conducted by a famous journalist, for a batsman, he shared his incident in the show, that a particular day he was attending a wedding ceremony, he was enjoying the song while dancing and one of the waiters pictured him. Furthermore, this picture and video went viral on Facebook, which made him realize that, gaining a fame is not that simple as he thought. As a result, he was highlighted most of the time in public.
To conclude, being a famous character could bring ups and downs in one’s life, but a human being should not bother about these issues, if they are perfect in their own way. In addition, they should accept these situations as a positive side and keep their standards high.
Due to the rapid increase in western culture, everyone is working
hard
to achieve a certain height, where an individual could
be recognized
, as a
famous
character,
for instance
, actors, actresses
as well
as sports stars. This brings
a lot of
fame and
moreover
, it could
also
be problematic
sometimes
. In my strong conviction, being a
famous
personality could be an amalgamation of advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly
, a human being puts its all the efforts to reach, at the heights of success and
finally
his
hard
work pays off. According to the study, published in the 2018 Edition, the writer highlighted
some
points, for illustration, he observed that
many
times the celebrities need not
to stand
in a queue or even wait for their turn,
because
they are
so
popular that, within a fraction of time their tasks
are completed
.
Thus
, providing them a great deal of advantage as per their fame.
Secondly
,
some
famous
personalities could even face problems in public, when they are
socially
active. To illustrate, an interview
was conducted
by a
famous
journalist, for a batsman, he shared his incident in the
show
, that a particular day he was attending a wedding ceremony, he was enjoying the song while dancing and one of the waiters pictured him.
Furthermore
, this picture and video went viral on Facebook, which made him realize that, gaining a fame is not that simple as he
thought
.
As a result
, he
was highlighted
most of the time in public.
To conclude
, being a
famous
character could bring ups and downs in one’s life,
but
a human being should not bother about these issues, if they are perfect in their
own
way.
In addition
, they should accept these situations as a
positive
side and
keep
their standards high.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes