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With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important do you think letter writing is? Do you thin letter writi v.3

With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important do you think letter writing is? Do you thin letter writi v. 3
Nowadays, with rapid growth of technology and also presentation of social networks people do communicate with each other easily in least amount of time. They can discuss with each other on subjects on line and can get their answer at the moment. This essay will shed some light on this argument and try to analysis it before arriving at conclusion. The first positive point that is important in writing letter is the feeling of letter writing on paper with ink has a unforgettable feeling for both, writer and reader and also some time readers read the letter on their mind with writer voice, so that it has direct effect on readers mind. Hand writing letter and sending them through post offices even can touch readers heart in some emotional relationship. Moreover, in writing letter people try to use correct grammar more than when they write any messages on computer or on their smart phones, because letters are more formal than other writings, thus the grammar of every language in the world will be protect and use in right places. For instance, we use contraction sentence in their emails or messages but in hand writing letter we never use it. Furthermore, it is obvious that words have deep effect on everybody. Writing letter get this opportunity to check their writing before we want to send, but on line conversation do not has this option, and use wrong text in our chat may never to be forgotten. At the conclusion, in my opinion, because of advanced technology and use of communication equipment such as mobile phone, tablet or laptop and also video calls every time everywhere, people do not want to use traditional ways for their relationships, and step by step writing letters is getting forgotten. Unfortunately, we are evidence that the number of post box in houses are decreasing and it shows that nobody in not wait for receiving letter from others.
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also
presentation of social networks
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people
do communicate with each
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other
easily
in
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least
amount of time. They can discuss with each
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other
on subjects on line and can
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get
their answer at the moment. This essay will shed
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some
light on this argument and try to analysis it
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before
arriving at conclusion.

The
first
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positive
point
that is
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important
in
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writing
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letter
is the feeling of
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letter
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writing
on paper with ink has
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a
unforgettable feeling for both, writer and reader and
also
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some
time readers read the
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letter
on their mind with writer voice,
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so
that it has direct effect on readers mind. Hand
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writing
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letter
and sending them through post offices even can touch readers heart in
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some
emotional relationship.
Moreover
, in
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writing
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letter
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people
try to
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use
correct grammar more than when they write any messages on computer or on their smart phones,
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because
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letters
are more formal than
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other
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writings
,
thus
the grammar of every language in the world will be
Consider using the past participle "protected"?
protect
and
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use
in right places.
For instance
, we
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use
contraction sentence in their emails or messages
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but
in hand
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writing
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letter
we never
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use
it.
Furthermore
, it is obvious that words have deep effect on everybody.
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Writing
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letter
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get
this opportunity to
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check
their
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writing
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before
we want to
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send
,
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but
on line conversation do not
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has
this option, and
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use
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wrong
text in our chat may never to
be forgotten
.

At the conclusion, in my opinion,
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because
of advanced technology and
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use
of communication equipment such as mobile phone, tablet or laptop and
also
video calls every time everywhere,
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people
do not want to
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use
traditional ways for their relationships, and step by step
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
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letters
is getting forgotten. Unfortunately, we are evidence that the number of post box in
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houses
are decreasing and it
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shows
that nobody in not wait for receiving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
from others.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important do you think letter writing is? Do you thin letter writi v. 3

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
321 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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