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With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters, some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters, some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. v. 1
It is an undeniable fact that with the advancement in telecommunication people tends to write and emails and text rather than letters. Several people believe that writing letters will be vanished in the future. This essay will discuss and provide some example to explain why writing letters will not completely eradicated. Undoubtedly, these days more and more people used mobile phones and computers for communication with friends and family members because it is an easiest and fastest way to commute. Many people believe that the traditional skills of writing letters disappear because of mobile phones and computers. However, it will not completely eradicated because writing letters used in many government offices. For example, in India the electricity department used writing letters to complain, for requesting of electricity metre and so on. The officers also saved these letters as a proof. Moreover, in business writing letters is used for many important documents. Therefore, writing letters are not vanishing. Furthermore, writing letters to friends and family members as a show gesture of love. Also writing letters as an emotion from writer to reader and this is not replaced by text message and images. For instance, on the person's birthday, writing letters makes a person happier rather than sending text message and images. In such case, our handwriting has special meaning for the recipient of our letters. Hence, writing letters still used in future also. In conclusion, although mobile phones and computers will continue to be the main means of communication because of their convenience and efficiency. However, I believe traditional skills of writing letters is Steel important as this are preferable in some special occasion.
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tends
to write and emails and text
rather
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letters
. Several
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people
believe that
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writing
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letters
will
be vanished
in the future. This essay will discuss and provide
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some
example to
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explain
why
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writing
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letters
will not completely
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eradicated
.

Undoubtedly
, these days more and more
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people
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used
mobile phones and computers for communication with friends and family members
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because
it is an easiest and fastest way to commute.
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Many
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people
believe that the traditional
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skills
of
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writing
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letters
disappear
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because
of mobile phones and computers.
However
, it will not completely
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eradicated
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because
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writing
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letters
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used
in
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many
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government
offices.
For example
, in India the electricity department
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used
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writing
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letters
to complain, for requesting of electricity
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metre
and
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so
on. The officers
also
saved these
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letters
as a proof.
Moreover
, in business
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writing
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letters
is
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used
for
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many
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important
documents.
Therefore
,
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writing
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letters
are not vanishing.

Furthermore
,
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writing
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letters
to friends and family members as a
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show
gesture of
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love
.
Also
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writing
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letters
as an emotion from writer to reader and this is not replaced by text message and images.
For instance
, on the person's birthday,
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writing
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letters
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makes
a person happier
rather
than sending text message and images. In such case, our handwriting has special meaning for the recipient of our
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letters
.
Hence
,
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writing
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letters
still
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used
in future
also
.

In conclusion
, although mobile phones and computers will continue to be the main means of communication
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because
of their convenience and efficiency.
However
, I believe traditional
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skills
of
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writing
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letters
is Steel
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important
as
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this are
preferable in
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some
special occasion.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters, some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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