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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. The say that the only way to increase recycle is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.5

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. The say that the only way to increase recycle is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 5
Nowadays, using of unrecyclable materials is increasing and also the amount of garbage which are not go back to resumption cycle is growing up too. Some people believe that these kind of issue will be solved by strong punishment by administers. The can set the crucial rule for civilization who do not try to change their habit, while others think differently. In their opinion, law is not the only way that government can against with this problem. Legal requirement could be use after showing some solution. This essay will shed some lights on this argument from both sides, and extend my partial support to the latter view before arriving at conclusion. Setting statute and put hard pressure on the people, causes that they recycle their domestic rubbish because of fear of severe penalty. It means that for breaking a rule or law they have to pay money. Moreover, putting heavy tax on company who produce materials which are not reuse can be a good effect on increasing reprocess homes refuse. They can use kind of substance that they need less time to absorb to the nature or they are changed to first-hand materials easily. Besides, setting rule for big and small supermarkets that compel them to use renewable packages for their product or advertisement is one of the best solution for these problems, since the large usage of supermarkets goods is related to domestic’s consumptions, so it can be the best answer for it. On the other hand, some people in society think that punishment or fine sometime have reverse effect on people. Encouraging or paying reward to someone who produce more recycle from their waste can be the best way to teach people. Because of that other civilization try to be a good citizen and also shows their responsibility with nature to receive retribution. In addition, for protecting earth and environment from garbage, advertising is a one of the didactic ways. TV or billboards advertising could improve people’s aware from dangerous of unrenewable material. Giving facility before enforce laws is another way to face with these problems. Government can build some recycle station near residential complex for helping them to separate their dry, wet, plastic, glass or any other rubbish. I mean that, recycling can start from individual’s home. At the conclusion, experience shows that finding logical and motive solution always is better than punishment or fine. Generally, humans can accept better everything in tranquility and reject compulsory things.
Nowadays, using of
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unrecyclable
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materials
is increasing and
also
the amount of garbage which are not
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go
back to resumption cycle is growing up too.
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Some
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people
believe that
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these kind
of issue will
be solved
by strong punishment by administers. The can set the crucial
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rule
for civilization who do not try to
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change
their habit, while others
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think
differently
. In their opinion, law is not the
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only
way that
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government
can against with this problem. Legal requirement could be
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use
after showing
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some
solution. This essay will shed
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some
lights on this argument from both sides, and extend my partial support to the latter view
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before
arriving at conclusion.

Setting statute and put
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hard
pressure on the
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people
, causes that they recycle their domestic rubbish
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because
of fear of severe penalty. It means that for breaking a
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rule
or law they
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have to
pay money.
Moreover
, putting heavy tax on
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company
who produce
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materials
which are not reuse can be a
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good
effect on increasing reprocess homes refuse. They can
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use
kind of substance that they need less time to absorb to the
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nature or
they are
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changed
to
first
-hand
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materials
easily
.
Besides
, setting
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rule
for
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big
and
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small
supermarkets that compel them to
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use
renewable packages for their product or advertisement is one of the best solution for these problems, since the large usage of supermarkets
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goods
is related
to domestic’s
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consumptions
,
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so
it can be the best answer for it.

On the
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other
hand,
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some
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people
in society
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think
that punishment or fine sometime have reverse effect on
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people
. Encouraging or paying reward to someone who produce more recycle from their waste can be the best way to teach
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people
.
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Because
of that
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other
civilization try to be a
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good
citizen and
also
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shows
their responsibility with nature to receive retribution.
In addition
, for protecting earth and environment from garbage, advertising is a one of the didactic ways. TV or billboards advertising could
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improve
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people’s
aware from
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dangerous
of
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unrenewable
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material
. Giving facility
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before
enforce laws is another way to face with these problems.
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Government
can build
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some
recycle station near residential complex for helping them to separate their dry, wet, plastic, glass or any
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other
rubbish. I mean that, recycling can
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start
from individual’s home.

At the conclusion, experience
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shows
that finding logical and motive solution always is better than punishment or fine.
Generally
, humans can accept better everything in tranquility and reject compulsory things.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. The say that the only way to increase recycle is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
410 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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