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With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What measures could both government and individuals take to deal with this situation? v.1

With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What measures could both government and individuals take to deal with this situation? v. 1
A rapid increment in private-owned vehicles has caused roads become more congested. If preventive measures are not applied in time, this might create difficult situation globally. As vehicles are now an inseparable part of human life, both government and individuals should inhabit some measures. Government plays a vital role in managing vehicles number and size of roads. The government can adopt measures like higher tax-rate, public awareness programmes and wider road construction to manage traffic and discourage the rapid growth in the private vehicles. Another solution to this problem is to encourage people to use public transportation by carefully managing routes. Also, small public vehicles can be replaced by bigger vehicles and cost of using public transportation should be remarkably lower than using private vehicles. Finally, implementing more effective traffic rules can have marked positive result in both minimising the growth rate of private-owned vehicles and managing traffic problems. Along with the government, individuals also play an important role in this context. The preventive solution that an individual can apply is to minimise the use of private-owned vehicles when not necessary. People should use public transportation services as it reduces the problem of road congestion and use of fuel as well. Encouraging friends, family and neighbours to use private-owned vehicles only when necessary can be another effective measure as well. Individuals should follow traffic rules strictly and encourage the government to adopt effective solutions. In conclusion, government and public both should be responsible and inhabit necessary practices. The problem can be tackled only if both sides act in their part.
A rapid increment in private-
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owned
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vehicles
has caused
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roads
become more congested. If preventive measures are not applied in time, this might create difficult situation globally. As
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vehicles
are
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now
an inseparable part of human life, both
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government
and
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individuals
should inhabit
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some
measures.

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Government
plays a vital role in managing
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vehicles
number and size of
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roads
. The
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government
can adopt measures like higher tax-rate,
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public
awareness
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programmes
and wider
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road
construction to manage
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traffic
and discourage the rapid growth in the private
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vehicles
. Another solution to this problem is to encourage
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people
to
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use
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public
transportation by
carefully
managing routes.
Also
,
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small
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public
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vehicles
can
be replaced
by bigger
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vehicles
and cost of using
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public
transportation should be
remarkably
lower than using private
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vehicles
.
Finally
, implementing more effective
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traffic
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rules
can have marked
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positive
result in both
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minimising
the growth rate of private-
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owned
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vehicles
and managing
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traffic
problems.

Along with the
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government
,
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individuals
also
play an
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important
role in this context. The preventive solution that an
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individual
can apply is to
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minimise
the
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use
of private-
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owned
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vehicles
when not necessary.
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People
should
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use
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public
transportation services as it
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reduces
the problem of
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road
congestion and
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use
of fuel
as well
. Encouraging friends, family and
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neighbours
to
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use
private-
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owned
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vehicles
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only
when necessary can be another effective measure
as well
.
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Individuals
should follow
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traffic
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rules
strictly
and encourage the
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government
to adopt effective solutions.

In conclusion
,
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government
and
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public
both should be responsible and inhabit necessary practices. The problem can
be tackled
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only
if both sides act in their part.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What measures could both government and individuals take to deal with this situation? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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