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while recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree. give your opinion with relevant example. v.1

while recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experience. give your opinion with relevant example. v. 1
So, according to the opinions of different persons now watching a movie is okay on their respective mobile devices such as tablets and cell phones while others think opposite and supports the traditional way I. e. Them prefers to watch it on a big screen by going outside. While the transformation of technology has impacted this areas as well, there is no denying the fact that most of the persons now have opted for this option like to entertain themselves by watching movies on the portable devices. So this point certainly has some gravity in order to think about this perspective, it can also be considered as time effective and somehow cost effective as well, because prices would be cheaper in comparison with the other side. And as with the ongoing launches of new applications which provided the premium content on these portable devices people have shifted in this direction of entertaining themselves. However to discuss other side, we do have the original taste of watching a picture like to feel all the effects and actions on a big screen that is a whole other level. Even with the new technology, there are still many people who still like to watch in a traditional way and also by going out with their loved one's to enjoy the company of each other they feel more entertained. So to summarize, I must say that as much as people would like to explore and leverage the technology to save time and entertain themselves, the original essence of watching a movie in a theatre is a different level whole-together. So to my views I would always prefer to go outside and watch the movie whenever it's feasible and will only opt for another option when there are no other choices left.
So
, according to the opinions of
different
persons
now
watching a
movie
is okay on their respective mobile devices such as tablets and cell phones while others
think
opposite and supports the traditional way
I. e.
Them
prefers to
watch
it on a
big
screen by going outside.

While the transformation of technology has impacted
this
areas
as well
, there is no denying the fact that most of the persons
now
have opted for this option like to entertain themselves by watching
movies
on the portable devices.
So
this point
certainly
has
some
gravity in order to
think
about this perspective, it can
also
be considered
as time effective and somehow cost effective
as well
,
because
prices would be cheaper
in comparison
with the
other
side. And as with the ongoing launches of new applications which provided the premium content on these portable devices
people
have shifted in this direction of entertaining themselves.

However
to discuss
other
side, we do have the original taste of watching a picture like to feel all the effects and actions on a
big
screen
that is
a whole
other
level. Even with the new technology, there are
still
many
people
who
still
like to
watch
in a traditional way
and
also
by going out with their
loved
one's to enjoy the
company
of each
other
they feel more entertained.

So
to summarize
, I
must
say that as much as
people
would like to explore and leverage the technology to save time and entertain themselves, the original essence of watching a
movie
in a
theatre
is a
different
level whole-together.
So
to my views I would always prefer to go outside and
watch
the
movie
whenever it's feasible and will
only
opt for another option when there are no
other
choices
left
.
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IELTS essay while recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experience. give your opinion with relevant example. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
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