If I was asked to make a choice between a high-paying job with long hours and a lower-paying job with shorter hours I would hesitate to answer. I did not decide for myself yet what I want in my life more my family or my career. I think that these options are very different ones and one needs time to make a right decision.
From the one side, a high-paying job with long hours gives one more opportunities to make a great career and succeed in life. Another important aspect of this is that one can earn more money for his family. In addition to these practical benefits, a person can get satisfaction and self-realisation that are very important in one's life. I think that it is a very great and essential feeling to be a part of the progress, make differences and be satisfied with the job. However, a high-paying job with long hours brings many disadvantages too. For example, a person will have less time for his family and friends. Secondly, the job will be more stressful and bring more responsibilities. A person will have to sacrifice many things to his job.
From the other side, a low-paying job with shorter hours can bring many benefits. One can spend more time with his family and have many pleasant and beautiful moments together. Also, a job will be less stressful and not require to sacrifice one's spare time to get it done. However, a person most likely will not be able to make a career and make much money. Moreover, one's salary may be not enough to pay for his children's education.
To sum up, I think that every person at least one time in his life realize this and make a decision whether he or she wants a career or great family. And I did not make this decision yet.
If I
was asked
to
make
a choice between a high-paying
job
with long
hours
and a lower-paying
job
with shorter
hours
I would hesitate to answer. I did not decide for myself
yet
what I want in my
life
more my
family
or my
career
. I
think
that these options are
very
different
ones and one needs
time
to
make
a right decision.
From the one side, a high-paying
job
with long
hours
gives one more opportunities to
make
a great
career
and succeed in
life
. Another
important
aspect of this is that one can earn more money for his
family
.
In addition
to these practical benefits, a
person
can
get
satisfaction and
self-realisation
that are
very
important
in one's
life
. I
think
that it is a
very
great and essential feeling to be a part of the progress,
make
differences and
be satisfied
with the
job
.
However
, a high-paying
job
with long
hours
brings
many
disadvantages too.
For example
, a
person
will have less
time
for his
family
and friends.
Secondly
, the
job
will be more stressful and bring more responsibilities. A
person
will
have to
sacrifice
many
things to his job.
From the other side, a low-paying
job
with shorter
hours
can bring
many
benefits. One can spend more
time
with his
family
and have
many
pleasant and
beautiful
moments together.
Also
, a
job
will be less stressful and not require to sacrifice one's spare
time
to
get
it done.
However
, a
person
most likely will not be able to
make
a
career
and
make
much money.
Moreover
, one's salary may be not
enough
to pay for his children's education.
To sum up, I
think
that every
person
at least one
time
in his
life
realize this and
make
a decision whether he or she wants a
career
or great
family
. And I did not
make
this decision
yet
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes