My husband and I live in an apartment, which includes a bedroom, living room, bathroom and kitchen. We do not have children yet, so our apartment is pretty small but it is cheap and cozy. If I would have to choose the most important room in a house I think it would be living room. In the following paragraphs, I will present my reasons to support my answer.
First of all, a living room is the place where we take our guests. It is the main and the biggest room in our apartment and we try to keep it clean and cozy. For example, my husband vacuums it every other day especially when it is wet outside and our dog makes dirty sports on the carpet with its paws after a walk. Second of all, I think that living room is the most important room in our house because we spend most of our time there watching TV, having our dinner and just talking with each other. Finally, our living room is a place where we study. Since our apartment is rather small we do not have a room for studying, so I have my table with the computer on it in our living room. I like to study there because the room is perfectly light with the large windows and the beautiful view from them.
My parents have a much bigger house with six rooms, large kitchen and two floors. However, I think that my mother would agree with me that their living room is the most important room in the house. When we visit them we always gather there, lay the table, and have a long talk. My mother makes delicious cakes and aromatic tea. I like those moments.
To sum up, I think many people will agree with me that living room is the most important room in a house because it is the room where people spend most of their time at home.
My husband and I
live
in an
apartment
, which includes a bedroom,
living
room
, bathroom and kitchen. We do not have children
yet
,
so
our
apartment
is pretty
small
but
it is
cheap
and cozy.
If
I would
have to
choose the most
important
room
in a
house
I
think
it would be
living
room
. In the following paragraphs, I will present my reasons to support my answer.
First of all
, a
living
room
is the place where we take our guests. It is the main and the biggest
room
in our
apartment and
we try to
keep
it clean and cozy.
For example
, my husband vacuums it every other day
especially
when it is wet outside and our dog
makes
dirty sports on the carpet with its paws after a walk. Second of all, I
think
that
living
room
is the most
important
room
in our
house
because
we spend most of our time there watching TV, having our dinner and
just
talking with each other.
Finally
, our
living
room
is a place where we study. Since our
apartment
is
rather
small
we do not have a
room
for studying,
so
I have my table with the computer on it in our
living
room
. I like to study there
because
the
room
is
perfectly
light with the large windows and the
beautiful
view from them.
My parents have a much bigger
house
with six
rooms
, large kitchen and two floors.
However
, I
think
that my mother would
agree
with me that their
living
room
is the most
important
room
in the
house
. When we visit them we always gather there, lay the table, and have a long talk. My mother
makes
delicious cakes and aromatic tea. I like those moments.
To sum up, I
think
many
people
will
agree
with me that
living
room
is the most
important
room
in a
house
because
it is the
room
where
people
spend most of their time at home.
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