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Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? v.2

Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? v. 2
Nowadays, governments manage various schedules and follow different policies to preserve the forests because the plants not only are the habitats of many animals, but also have significant benefits such as providing food, shelter, cover, and drug for the humankind. Although some people noticeably believe that food is the certain advantage of plants, in my reckoning, I prefer the plants which provide useful drugs and medicines and owing to special weather in my city. First and foremost, because of the special weather in my hometown, the farmers grow the medicinal plants more than other plants. As a matter of fact, the condition forces farmers to cultivate these plants. On the other hand, there are various kinds of modern transportation systems, factories, and to name a few which emit hazardous pollutants into the air. Without any doubt, these emissions not only destroy the animal's habitat but also cause many dangerous illnesses to the human. Also, according to some research conducted by many experts of psychology, the plant's drug has a profound impact on curing people and this is specifically true for the people in my country. Moreover, medicinal plants and herbal drugs have very little side effects and the people in my country rely on those herbal medicines for different diseases. In contrast to natural drugs, the chemical drugs sometimes have irrecoverable effects. Scientists proved that although the chemical drugs can cure some diseases, it has critical side effects on our body. Indisputably, having more effective outcomes of the medicinal plants is the dominant reason for my preference of the medicinal plants.
Nowadays,
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governments
manage various schedules and follow
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different
policies to preserve the forests
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because
the
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plants
not
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only
are the habitats of
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many
animals,
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but
also
have significant benefits such as providing food, shelter, cover, and
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drug
for the humankind. Although
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some
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people
noticeably
believe that food is the certain advantage of
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plants
, in my reckoning, I prefer the
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plants
which provide useful
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drugs
and medicines and owing to special weather in my city.

First
and foremost,
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because
of the special weather in my hometown, the farmers grow the medicinal
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plants
more than other
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plants
. As a matter of fact, the condition forces farmers to cultivate these
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plants
.
On the other hand
, there are various kinds of modern transportation systems, factories, and to name a few which emit hazardous pollutants into the air. Without any doubt, these emissions not
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only
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destroy
the animal's habitat
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but
also
cause
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many
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dangerous
illnesses to the human.
Also
, according to
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some
research conducted by
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many
experts of psychology, the plant's
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drug
has a profound impact on curing
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people
and this is
specifically
true for the
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people
in my country.

Moreover
, medicinal
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plants
and herbal
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drugs
have
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very
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little
side effects and the
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people
in my country rely on those herbal medicines for
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different
diseases.
In contrast
to natural
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drugs
, the chemical
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drugs
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sometimes
have irrecoverable effects. Scientists proved that although the chemical
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drugs
can cure
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some
diseases, it has critical side effects on our body.

Indisputably
, having more effective outcomes of the medicinal
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plants
is the dominant reason for my preference of the medicinal
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plants
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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