It is argued that volunteering should be made part of the school curriculum. This essay agrees with that suggestion completely because of the benefits it brings to pupils. The essay will first look at how voluntary work can help students develop soft skills and then discuss how these extracurricular activities are valued by universities and employers.
Education should not be limited to strictly academic pursuits and those in education should also develop life skills, such as teamwork, empathy and self-discipline, and one of the best ways to hone these aptitudes is through community service. Serving those less fortunate than ourselves teaches us many lessons including how to work with people from other backgrounds and the value of hard work. For example, I personally volunteered to spend 6 weeks in Africa teaching disadvantaged children and this led to a much higher work ethic when I returned to my studies.
Many colleges and companies are also increasingly looking for this type of experience. Most school leavers have the same grades and charitable works can help set you apart from the herd. For example, Cambridge and Oxford receive thousands of applications from straight-A students every year and can only accept a small percentage of applicants. What you have done outside the classroom is often the thing that differentiates you from everyone else and gets you that coveted spot.
In conclusion, teenagers should be made to partake in unpaid work as part of their schooling because it will help them learn things they wouldn’t ordinarily learn from their teachers and it will also boost their chances of getting into third level education.
It
is argued
that volunteering should
be made
part of the school curriculum. This essay
agrees
with that suggestion completely
because
of the
benefits
it brings to pupils. The essay will
first
look at how voluntary
work
can
help
students develop soft
skills
and then discuss how these extracurricular activities
are valued
by universities and employers.
Education should not
be limited
to
strictly
academic pursuits and those in education should
also
develop life
skills
, such as teamwork, empathy and self-discipline, and one of the best ways to hone these aptitudes is through community service. Serving those less fortunate than ourselves teaches us
many
lessons including how to
work
with
people
from other backgrounds and the value of
hard
work
.
For example
, I
personally
volunteered to spend 6 weeks in Africa teaching disadvantaged children and this led to a much higher
work
ethic when I returned to my studies.
Many
colleges and
companies
are
also
increasingly
looking for this type of experience. Most
school leavers
have the same grades and charitable works can
help
set you apart from the herd.
For example
, Cambridge and Oxford receive thousands of applications from straight-A students every year and can
only
accept a
small
percentage of applicants. What you have done outside the classroom is
often
the thing that
differentiates
you from everyone else and
gets
you that coveted spot.
In conclusion
,
teenagers
should
be made
to partake in unpaid
work
as part of their schooling
because
it will
help
them learn things they wouldn’t
ordinarily
learn from their teachers and it will
also
boost their chances of getting into third level education.
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