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It is often believed that decisions taken quickly are wrong decisions. Are quick decisions always wrong? v.1

It is often believed that decisions taken quickly are wrong decisions. Are quick decisions always wrong? v. 1
It is universally agreed that haste leads to repentance. Some people are so inclined to take quick decisions. Others do not like such hasty decisions. However, I am with the latter ones. For several reasons, I strongly believe that quick decisions must be avoided for they lead, to some extent, to devastating consequences. There is no doubt that quick decisions affect the person too much. For example, my brother was a teacher. In fact, he was asked by a company to leave his job and to join them. Moreover, they told him that they would give him double his salary that he used to gain from the school. Then, he quickly decided to leave his job and to join the company. Unfortunately, he was not satisfied with such job since it was tiring and boring. As a result, he began to strongly blame himself for such reckless and quick decision. It is admittedly known that it is a fallacy that quick decisions are deemed to be like seizing an opportunity. In fact, there is a huge difference between the two. The first means hasty and recklessness while the second is a good thing that we should implement.   Additionally, we should not justify our quick decisions by saying it is a good chance that we have to make use of it. Consequently, it must be noticed that quick decisions have nothing to do with good opportunities or chances since quick decisions are a result of wrong estimate or thinking. In conclusion, it cannot be overlooked that quick decisions are harmful and non-effective. Hence, before one decides to take a decision, he has to think it over many times or he can seek consultation or advice from those who tasted the experience of life.
It is
universally
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agreed
that haste leads to repentance.
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Some
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people
are
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so
inclined to take
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quick
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decisions
. Others do not like such hasty
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decisions
.
However
, I am with the latter ones. For several reasons, I
strongly
believe that
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quick
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decisions
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must
be avoided
for they lead, to
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some
extent, to devastating consequences.

There is no doubt that
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quick
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decisions
affect the person too much.
For example
, my brother was a teacher. In fact, he
was asked
by a
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company
to
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leave
his job and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
them.
Moreover
, they
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told
him that they would give him double his salary that he
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used
to gain from the school. Then, he
quickly
decided to
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leave
his job and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. Unfortunately, he was not satisfied with such job since it was tiring and boring.
As a result
, he began to
strongly
blame himself for such reckless and
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quick
decision.

It is
admittedly
known that it is a fallacy that
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quick
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decisions
are deemed
to be like seizing an opportunity. In fact, there is a huge difference between the two. The
first
means hasty and recklessness while the second is a
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good
thing that we should implement.
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Additionally
, we should not justify our
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quick
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decisions
by saying it is a
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good
chance that we
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have to
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make
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use
of it.
Consequently
, it
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must
be noticed
that
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quick
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decisions
have nothing to do with
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good
opportunities or chances since
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quick
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decisions
are a result of
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wrong
estimate or thinking.

In conclusion
, it cannot
be overlooked
that
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quick
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decisions
are harmful and non-effective.
Hence
,
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before
one decides to take a
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decision
, he
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has to
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think
it over
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many
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
times or
he can seek consultation or advice from those who tasted the experience of life.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS essay It is often believed that decisions taken quickly are wrong decisions. Are quick decisions always wrong? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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