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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. v. 1
People often attribute successes to good luck, and even more often, failures to bad luck. In my opinion, it is superficial to have the idea that one’s achievements are decided mostly by chance. When considering the list of factors in one’s success, effort, talent and determination should not be placed under luck. Generally, as defined, luck is success or failure decided by chance instead of one’s action. It’s often said life is like a gamble, and so whether we win or not is a matter of luck. In fact, luck is only a human concept, in order to give a more meaningful reason to random, either good or bad happenings in life, such as having an accident or winning a lottery. Yet, in any cases, calling others’ achievement luck then is likely to disregard their personal effort. In term of true success, we should adopt a different perception of luck. From the simplest achievements like passing an exam to major ones reaching for your life goals, good fortunes usually accompany with hard work and preparation. The more you review your exam the higher chance you know the answer to a question. In other words, luck is something that we can make ourselves. According to one research, called The Science of Luck, the subject might involve psychology and behavior rather than probability. It indicates that people who are perceived as the luckier tend to have skills and talents in noticing and creating opportunities, sharp intuition, positive expectations and most important, the attitude toward failures. Hence, luck is in this mind-set, a manifestation of personal traits, talents and labor. In addition, whether one succeeds or not depends on luck, is also an outdated notion. In both the scopes of human history and one’s life, as knowledge and experience being built, humans have been depending less on chances and controlling more of the forces that might affect their lives, by predicting outcomes through past experiences and preparing interventions. We could say luck is like fruit, if we do not climb up the tree we never get one. Occasionally, it might fall upon our head by pure chance. Regardless, the chance of receiving such luck is extremely low and not be depended on to create major successes in life. Furthermore, gaining by pure luck like winning lottery to me does not worth considering as a success or achievement, but only good fortunes. While we should appreciate the external elements, we also need to maximize our chance of success by hard and smart work. I believe the goddess of fortunes would not smile upon us unless we had proved our effort and determination. To conclude, it isn’t a question of luck, but the question: Are you prepared for the opportunity?
People
often
attribute
successes
to
good
luck, and even more
often
, failures to
bad
luck. In my opinion, it is superficial to have the
idea
that one’s
achievements
are decided
mostly
by chance. When considering the list of factors in one’s
success
, effort, talent and determination should not
be placed
under luck.

Generally
, as defined, luck is
success
or failure decided by chance
instead
of one’s action. It’s
often
said
life
is like a gamble, and
so
whether we win or not is a matter of luck. In fact, luck is
only
a human concept, in order to give a more meaningful reason to random, either
good
or
bad
happenings in
life
, such as having an accident or winning a lottery.
Yet
, in any cases, calling others’
achievement
luck then is likely to disregard their personal effort. In term of true
success
, we should adopt a
different
perception of luck. From the simplest
achievements
like passing an exam to major
ones
reaching for your
life
goals,
good
fortunes
usually
accompany with
hard
work and preparation. The more you review your exam the higher chance you know the answer to a question.
In other words
, luck is something that we can
make
ourselves.

According to one research, called The Science of Luck, the subject might involve psychology and behavior
rather
than probability. It indicates that
people
who
are perceived
as the luckier tend to have
skills
and talents in noticing and creating opportunities, sharp intuition,
positive
expectations and most
important
, the attitude toward failures.
Hence
, luck is in this mind-set, a manifestation of personal traits, talents and labor.
In addition
, whether one succeeds or not depends on luck, is
also
an outdated notion. In both the scopes of human history and one’s
life
, as knowledge and experience
being built
, humans have been depending less on
chances
and controlling more of the forces that might affect their
lives
, by predicting outcomes through
past experiences
and preparing interventions.

We could say luck is like fruit, if we do not climb up the tree we never
get
one.
Occasionally
, it might fall upon our head by pure chance. Regardless, the chance of receiving such luck is
extremely
low and not
be depended
on to create major
successes
in
life
.
Furthermore
, gaining by pure luck like winning lottery to me does not worth considering as a
success
or
achievement
,
but
only
good
fortunes.

While we should appreciate the external elements, we
also
need to maximize our chance of
success
by
hard
and smart work. I believe the goddess of fortunes would not smile upon us unless we had proved our effort and determination.
To conclude
, it isn’t a question of luck,
but
the question: Are you prepared for the opportunity?
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
455 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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