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when you have a question, do you prefer asking instructor for the answer or finding the answer for yourself through resources such as books and the internet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.1

when you have a question, do you prefer asking instructor for the answer or finding the answer for yourself through resources such as books and the internet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1
The awareness on recycling is increasing in many countries around the world. Whilst some are of the view that households are not doing enough to recycle their waste and that government legislation would be the best option. In my opinion, I believe that such laws are needed l, but exploring other means to ensure compliance should be looked into. On the one hand, the law would make it compulsory for regenerated by-product to be recycled. That is, domestic by-products are not disposed, but re-used in another way, and any disobedience to such rules would attract a penalty. However, since man would not want to be punished, they are bound by obligation to obey thereby ensuring that they play their part to make the environment safe. In Zimbabwe, for instance, the proportion of people recycling their trash increased by 16% after the senate passed a law to enforce household on waste regeneration. On the other hand, public education is more encompassing. When a considerable amount of energy is channeled towards public enlightenment, with the sole aim of making the people know the benefits of recycling, then more households are likely to join in the campaign. This is particularly important because recycling is one of the methods used to reduce the global warming because it reduces the amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere. Furthermore, incentives can also be employed. In other words, when citizens get certain rewards for turning their organic matters into useful products, it does not only encourage them to do more but they also enable others to do the same. The Sun Newspaper revealed that an average home in Pretoria recycles majority of their waste. This is because, every home that does this get some tax waver from the government. Hence, making it the city with the highest household recycling methods. In conclusion, the law would enforce homes to do the needful by recycling wastes which is basically out of obligation and not with a sense of responsibility. It is also important that we make people see the part they need to play and induce them where necessary. Only then are we going to see a dramatic change.
The awareness on
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recycling
is increasing in
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many
countries around the world. Whilst
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some
are of the view that
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households
are not doing
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enough
to recycle their
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waste
and that
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government
legislation would be the best option. In my opinion, I believe that such
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laws
are needed
l,
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but
exploring
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other
means to ensure compliance should
be looked
into.

On the one hand, the
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law
would
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make
it compulsory for regenerated by-product to
be recycled
.
That is
, domestic by-products are not disposed,
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but
re-
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used
in another way, and any disobedience to such
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rules
would attract a penalty.
However
, since
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man
would not want to
be punished
, they
are bound
by obligation to obey thereby ensuring that they play their part to
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make
the environment safe. In Zimbabwe,
for instance
, the proportion of
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people
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recycling
their trash increased by 16% after the senate passed a
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law
to enforce
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household
on
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waste
regeneration.

On the
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other
hand, public education is more encompassing. When a considerable amount of energy
is channeled
towards public enlightenment, with the sole aim of making the
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people
know the benefits of
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recycling
, then more
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households
are likely to
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join
in the campaign. This is
particularly
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important
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because
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recycling
is one of the methods
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used
to
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reduce
the global warming
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because
it
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reduces
the amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere.
Furthermore
, incentives can
also
be employed
. In
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other
words, when citizens
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
certain rewards for turning their organic matters into useful products, it does not
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only
encourage them to do more
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but
they
also
enable others to do the same. The Sun Newspaper revealed that an average home in Pretoria recycles
It seems that an article is missing.
majority of
their
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waste
. This is
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because
, every home that does this
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get
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some
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tax
waver from the
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government
.
Hence
, making it the city with the highest
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household
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recycling
methods.

In conclusion
, the
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law
would enforce homes to do the needful by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
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wastes
which is
basically
out of obligation and not with a sense of responsibility. It is
also
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important
that we
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make
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people
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see
the part they need to play and induce them where necessary.
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Only
then are we going to
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see
a dramatic
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change
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay when you have a question, do you prefer asking instructor for the answer or finding the answer for yourself through resources such as books and the internet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
361 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
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