270. There are two instructor options for your final class. One instructor is strict, gives a lot of homework, and expects a lot from students. The other instructor is not as strict and does not give as many assignments. Which instructor would you choose v.1
270. There are two instructor options for your final class. One instructor is strict, gives a lot of homework, and expects a lot from students. The other instructor is not as strict and does not give as many assignments. Which instructor would you choose v. 1
Some people believe big wages are positive for a country, others, however, think that salaries should be controlled and limited by the state. In this essay both views will be discussed and I will explain why I think high salaries should be allowed and promoted by the governments.
High salaries increase people possibilities to buy expensive goods or services and, consequently, benefit the economy of the country. Most multimillionaires, for example, have more than one car or house, and even change them quite often, improving the market of these goods. Having more money also improves life´s quality, in this manner, it secures more food, clothes, houses, health, and consequently happiness. Moreover, happy people suffer from less diseases, live longer and do better at work, which finally becomes a noticeable advantage for any country.
On the other hand, some people argue that the governments should control the salaries and limit how much workers earn to reduce the differences between the extreme poverty and those who are very wealthy. In Argentina, for example, there are laws that ensure all employees have equal wages bringing more even distribution of wealth. Another positive point of this measure is that there will allow the state to spend more money on public funding, such as education and health institutions, allowing a better service for all.
In conclusion, whereas many think that the state should ensure more equality to citizens and spend more money on public funding, in my opinion, higher wages, improve, not only people's quality of living, but also the economy of the country. Therefore, the government should be responsible for ensuring and encourage higher salaries for everybody.
Some
people
believe
big
wages are
positive
for a country, others,
however
,
think
that
salaries
should
be controlled
and limited by the state. In this essay both views will
be discussed
and I will
explain
why I
think
high
salaries
should be
allowed
and promoted by the
governments
.
High
salaries
increase
people
possibilities to
buy
expensive
goods
or services and,
consequently
, benefit the economy of the country. Most multimillionaires,
for example
, have more than one car or
house
, and even
change
them quite
often
, improving the market of these
goods
. Having more money
also
improves
life´s
quality, in this manner, it secures more food, clothes,
houses
, health, and
consequently
happiness.
Moreover
, happy
people
suffer from
less
diseases,
live
longer and do better at work, which
finally
becomes a noticeable advantage for any country.
On the other hand
,
some
people
argue that the
governments
should control the
salaries
and limit how much workers earn to
reduce
the differences between the extreme poverty and those who are
very
wealthy. In Argentina,
for example
, there are laws that ensure all employees have equal wages bringing more even distribution of wealth. Another
positive
point of this measure is that there will
allow
the state to spend more money on public funding, such as education and health institutions, allowing a better service for all.
In conclusion
, whereas
many
think
that the state should ensure more equality to citizens and spend more money on public funding, in my opinion, higher wages,
improve
, not
only
people
's quality of living,
but
also
the economy of the country.
Therefore
, the
government
should be responsible for ensuring and encourage higher
salaries
for everybody.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes