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when you face difficult problems in life, which do you feel is the best way to solve them- asking someone with more experience for advise about the problemUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.1

when you face difficult problems in life, which do you feel is the best way to solve them- asking someone with more experience for advise about the problemUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1
There are many online applications for translating languages which people are applying. These tools are beneficial in different ways, but there will be some drawbacks. I personally think that these apps are helpful while there are some problems with them, which can be handled. One evident benefit of using online translating applications is that they facilitate the communication between people throughout the world. For example, many online businesses are doing perfectly by people who do not know the English thoroughly with the aid of these applications in order to communicate. They use apps while they want to have a chat with others without any problem. Also, this type of applications assists the self learning of foreign languages. The learners can translate what they do not understand, easily, with the minimum cost, including having internet and a smart phone. However applying online apps are helpful, it also can be detrimental to learning or decreasing precision. To illustrate, due to the existence of these tools, the importance of learning a new language may be neglected. Because peoples' needs will be answered and there is no requirement in order to make efforts and learn a new language. Another demerit of these applications is that the precision of them are not fully reliable and authorized, for their source is information obtained through the internet. As a result, maybe they make misunderstanding in transferring concepts in different languages. To conclude, although there are various demerits to online applications, translating, the merits of them outnumber. If the using of them will be reasonable, they will be more handful in learning and communicating.
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some
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One evident benefit of using
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online
translating
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applications
is that they facilitate the communication between
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people
throughout the world.
For example
,
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many
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online
businesses are doing
perfectly
by
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people
who do not know the English
thoroughly
with the aid of these
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applications
in order to communicate. They
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use
apps while they want to have a chat with others without any problem.
Also
, this type of
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applications
assists the self
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learning
of foreign
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languages
. The learners can translate what they do not understand,
easily
, with the minimum cost, including having internet and a smart phone.

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applying
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online
apps are helpful, it
also
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learning
or decreasing precision. To illustrate, due to the existence of these tools, the importance of
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learning
a new
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language
may
be neglected
.
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peoples' needs will
be answered
and there is no requirement in order to
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make
efforts and learn a new
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language
. Another demerit of these
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applications
is that the precision of them are not
fully
reliable and authorized, for their source is information obtained through the internet.
As a result
, maybe they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
misunderstanding in transferring concepts in
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different
languages.

To conclude
, although there are various demerits to
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online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
applications
, translating, the merits of them outnumber. If the using of them will be reasonable, they will be more handful in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
and communicating.
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IELTS essay when you face difficult problems in life, which do you feel is the best way to solve them- asking someone with more experience for advise about the problemUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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