When a country develops its machinery, the traditional skills and style of living die out. While many people argued that it is useless to try to keep them alive, I strongly disagree with this opinion.
There are several reasons why traditional skills should be preserved. Firstly, traditional skills are the heritage from our ancestor and we have responsibility to take care of them. It would be aid us and the next generations to remain connected with our past, and we could learn numerous beneficial things from their culture. Secondly, conventional jobs can be an alternative way of life in the recent modern society. For example, the ones who got bored from the contemporary restaurant with repetitious cuisines, can go to an old cozy restaurant with historical decoration and traditional food to rest their minds and get rid of daily routines.
Although modern skills and technology make the life and the way of living more easier in comparison with traditional skills, majority of the recent jobs are inspired from conventional skills. Yet many can be inspired from the old skills. For instance, these days, people specially children are more prone to various diseases owing to the reason of unhealthy diet pattern. However, this problem can be overcome easily by adopting the natural way of eating or following herbal product which were commonly used by our predecessors. Hence, traditional skills can be combined with the technology to make modern jobs inspiring from ancient culture and skills.
In conclusion, despite of that the modern jobs make life easier, but combination of technology with traditional skills can be beneficial for the society along with preserving conventional skills.
When a country develops its machinery, the
traditional
skills
and style of living
die
out. While
many
people
argued that it is useless to try to
keep
them alive, I
strongly
disagree with this opinion.
There are several reasons why
traditional
skills
should
be preserved
.
Firstly
,
traditional
skills
are the heritage from our
ancestor and
we have responsibility to take care of them. It would be aid us and the
next
generations to remain connected with our past, and we could learn numerous beneficial things from their culture.
Secondly
, conventional
jobs
can be an alternative way of life in the recent
modern
society.
For example
, the ones who
got
bored from the contemporary restaurant with repetitious cuisines, can go to an
old
cozy restaurant with historical decoration and
traditional
food to rest their minds and
get
rid of daily routines.
Although
modern
skills
and technology
make
the life and the way of living
more easier
in comparison
with
traditional
skills
,
majority of
the recent
jobs
are inspired
from conventional
skills
.
Yet
many
can
be inspired
from the
old
skills
.
For instance
, these days,
people
specially
children are more prone to various diseases owing to the reason of unhealthy diet pattern.
However
, this problem can
be overcome
easily
by adopting the natural way of eating or following herbal product which were
commonly
used
by our predecessors.
Hence
,
traditional
skills
can
be combined
with the technology to
make
modern
jobs
inspiring from ancient culture and
skills
.
In conclusion
,
despite of
that the
modern
jobs
make
life easier,
but
combination of technology with
traditional
skills
can be beneficial for the society along with preserving conventional
skills
.
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