It is believed by some people the most crucial matter is a fitness and schooling. This essay argues that ministry pays for the health care centre and study because it is important for all masses. Both prospects need proper scrutiny before forming an opinion.
To commence with, paying a wealth of strength centre is a duty of ministry because all populace is the responsibility of power also energy services are superior for people and hospitals are cheaper for everyone. If union opens the civil hospitals for individuals, then all poor and rich masses afford this due to which they become healthy and no problem about salary in hospitals. For instance, in Canada ministry spend their sufficient wealth on well-being centre. Therefore, literacy is essential for all since there is no work get without study also children become sincere and disciplined than they obtain good scholarship which they will make a good person.
Furthermore, spending all wages on improvement and hospitals not superior as there is many places where the government want to pay and make good such as public transit, roads and so on which leads to countries become better. For example, road and public transportation constructed also reduced traffic congestion.
In conclusion, it is suggested by some people that the state spend all funds on fitness centres and training. In fact, many other places where politics wants to pay and make country more convenient.
It
is believed
by
some
people
the most crucial matter is a fitness and schooling. This essay argues that ministry pays for the health care
centre
and study
because
it is
important
for all masses. Both prospects need proper scrutiny
before
forming an opinion.
To commence with, paying a wealth of strength
centre
is a duty of ministry
because
all populace is the responsibility of power
also
energy services are superior for
people
and
hospitals
are cheaper for everyone. If union opens the civil
hospitals
for individuals, then all poor and rich masses afford this due to which they become healthy and no problem about salary in
hospitals
.
For instance
, in Canada ministry spend their sufficient wealth on well-being
centre
.
Therefore
, literacy is essential for all since there is no work
get
without study
also
children become sincere and disciplined than they obtain
good
scholarship which they will
make
a
good
person.
Furthermore
, spending all wages on improvement and
hospitals
not superior as there is
many
places where the
government
want to pay and
make
good
such as public transit, roads and
so
on which leads to countries become better.
For example
, road and public transportation constructed
also
reduced
traffic congestion.
In conclusion
, it
is suggested
by
some
people
that the state spend all funds on fitness
centres
and training. In fact,
many
other places where politics wants to pay and
make
country more convenient.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes