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what are the causes of water pollution? what are some possible effects and solutions? v.1

what are the causes of water pollution? what are some possible effects and solutions? v. 1
Contamination of water by harmful substances, which affects life on earth, is termed as water pollutions. Water sources are getting more and more polluted due to numerous activities. As a result, many adverse impacts exist. There are three main causes led to such a problem. The primary reason which plays a role in this issue is human activities. Household garbage which is disposed into various sources of water is extremely dangerous. additionally, many people in villages perform their domestic activities such as bathing, and washing clothes and utensils in rivers and lakes which affects the quality of water. The third major source of contaminated water is factories; industrial wastes that are discharged into water bring about polluted water. Hence, other activities may also produce polluted water. Numerous negative consequences appear due to this disaster. Firstly, the consumption of contaminated water gives rise to lots of diseases such as cholera and typhoid. secondly, water pollution has a harmful impact on the food chain; when harmful toxins are present in water they are transferred to higher level organisms through the food chain. Thirdly, water pollutants alter the overall chemistry of the water, causing changes in acidity, conductivity and temperature. These in turn have an effect on the aquatic life. Lastly, If oil is spilled on the water due to accidents, the effects on the ecosystem and the components are harmful. As a result, many animals can get destroyed in case they swallow oil. There is a lot we can do to save our water sources. Governments play a crucial role in solving this problem; they ought to impose taxes so that humans stop throwing their garbage in rivers. Sewage and industrial wastes should be treated before discharging into the water. In conclusion, governments and citizens have to go hand in hand to tackle that serious issue.
Contamination of
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water
by
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harmful
substances, which affects life on earth,
is termed
as
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water
pollutions.
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Water
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sources
are getting more and more polluted due to numerous
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activities
.
As a result
,
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many
adverse impacts exist.

There are three main causes led to such a problem. The primary reason which plays a role in this issue is human
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activities
. Household garbage which
is disposed
into various
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sources
of
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water
is
extremely
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dangerous
.
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additionally
,
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many
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people
in villages perform their domestic
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activities
such as bathing, and washing clothes and utensils in rivers and lakes which affects the quality of
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water
. The third major
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source
of contaminated
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water
is factories; industrial wastes that
are discharged
into
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water
bring about polluted
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water
.
Hence
, other
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activities
may
also
produce polluted water.

Numerous
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negative
consequences appear due to this disaster.
Firstly
, the consumption of contaminated
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water
gives rise to lots of diseases such as cholera and typhoid.
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secondly
,
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water
pollution has a
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harmful
impact on the food chain; when
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harmful
toxins are present in
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water
they
are transferred
to higher level organisms through the food chain.
Thirdly
,
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water
pollutants alter the
overall
chemistry of the
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water
, causing
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changes
in acidity, conductivity and temperature. These in turn have an effect on the aquatic life.
Lastly
, If oil
is spilled
on the
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water
due to accidents, the effects on the ecosystem and the components are
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harmful
.
As a result
,
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many
animals can
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get
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destroyed
in case they swallow oil.

There is a lot we can do to save our
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water
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sources
.
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Governments
play a crucial role in solving this problem; they ought to impose taxes
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so
that humans
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stop
throwing their garbage in rivers. Sewage and industrial wastes should
be treated
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before
discharging into the water.

In conclusion
,
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governments
and citizens
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have to
go hand in hand to tackle that serious issue.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay what are the causes of water pollution? what are some possible effects and solutions? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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