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What are the causes and effects of water pollution? v.1

What are the causes and effects of water pollution? v. 1
Water performs a primary role in our health. It's obvious that water contaminate by harmful substances, water is getting more and more polluted due to our activities. Water that is polluted due to contaminants is not preferred for human use. There are many causes of water pollution, but humans are the main cause, which forced researchers to study the effects of this phenomenon on earth. A huge amount of garbage from households and agricultural land and other commercial places is dumped into lakes and rivers. These wastes contain harmful chemicals and toxins which creates poisonous and damages the aquatic flora and fauna. Many people perform their domestic activities like bathing, washing clothes and utensils. Oil spilled from ships and tanks is hugely responsible for polluting the sea water. As the oil floating on the water surface, it prevents the flow of oxygen into the water. Furthermore, industrial wastes are discharged into the water also leading to water pollution. Unquestionably, consumption of this polluted water leads to diseases and many negative effects such as stunning plant growth, cholera and diarrah. We must seriously think over to execute some steps to stop or at least decrease this water pollution. Industrial wastes must be treated before disposal into water by waste water treatment plants. Any domestic activities like bathing and washing clothes should be banned. We should teach individuals about the harmful impacts of water pollution. We must force the law to prevent people and factories from polluted water. Use television and adverts to send a message to those who pollute water and to let them know about the effects of water pollution. Moderate the water use and don't leave the water running when you are not using it. Try to recycle everything as possible as you can. Because plastics and papers undoubtedly, are harmful for water and can cause water pollution. Water has played a pretty much noticeable part in our life on earth, it covers more than 70% of the surface of the earth, so it's crucial the we look into the study of water so if we didn't take a proper measures to stop water pollution, this major resource will be unfit for human use and will cause an enormous effect on our health.
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Water
performs a primary role in our health. It's obvious that
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water
contaminate by
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harmful
substances,
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water
is getting more and more
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polluted
due to our activities.
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Water
that is
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polluted
due to contaminants is not preferred for human
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use
. There are
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many
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causes
of
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water
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pollution
,
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but
humans are the main
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cause
, which forced researchers to study the effects of this phenomenon on earth.

A huge amount of garbage from households and agricultural land and other commercial places
is dumped
into lakes and rivers. These
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wastes
contain
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harmful
chemicals and toxins which creates poisonous and damages the aquatic flora and fauna.
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Many
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people
perform their domestic activities like bathing, washing clothes and utensils. Oil spilled from ships and tanks is
hugely
responsible for polluting the sea
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water
. As the oil floating on the
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water
surface, it
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prevents
the flow of oxygen into the
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water
.
Furthermore
, industrial
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wastes
are discharged
into the
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water
also
leading to
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water
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pollution
.
Unquestionably
, consumption of this
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polluted
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water
leads to diseases and
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many
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negative
effects such as stunning plant growth, cholera and
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diarrah
.

We
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must
seriously
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think
over to execute
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some
steps to
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stop
or at least decrease this
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water
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pollution
. Industrial
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wastes
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must
be treated
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before
disposal into
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water
by
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waste
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water
treatment plants. Any domestic activities like bathing and washing clothes should
be banned
. We should teach individuals about the
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harmful
impacts of
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water
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pollution
. We
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must
force the law to
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prevent
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people
and factories from
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polluted
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water
.
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Use
television and adverts to
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send
a message to those who pollute
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water
and to
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let
them know about the effects of
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water
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pollution
. Moderate the
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water
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use
and don't
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leave
the
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water
running when you are not using it. Try to recycle everything as possible as you can.
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Because
plastics and papers
undoubtedly
, are
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harmful
for
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water
and can
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cause
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water
pollution.

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so
it's crucial
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the we
look into the study of
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water
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so
if we didn't take a proper measures to
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stop
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water
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pollution
, this major resource will be unfit for human
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use
and will
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cause
an enormous
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effect
on our health.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
47Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay What are the causes and effects of water pollution? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
374 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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