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What are some important qualities of a good supervisor? Use specific details and examples to explain why the qualities are important. v.2

What are some important qualities of a good supervisor? Use specific details and examples to explain why the qualities are important. v. 2
Most of them at a workplace has a supervisor unless they are the Chief executive officer or the president. supervisor is the one who assigns their subordinates their work at guides them with it. they are also responsible for coaching and solving issues. For me the important quality of a supervisor are patience, team building skills, interactive, Confidence, Positive attitude, Flexibility. Most of the supervisors need these qualities to help their subordinate. For example when i was working one of my supervisor was the best. he had all the good qualities of being a supervisor. In this project my supervisor helped me a lot during my learning stages. he used to sit beside me in the early days as i was fresher while i was working and guide me at each and every step. even when i made mistakes he was there to support me and correct them. he taught me write mails efficiently and also to communicate with higher authorities with ease. he was always patient not only with me but with the entire team. he always encouraged us to do what we like and would also help in getting the work which benefits us in the future. he never berated us even when we made mistakes. he did scold us if we repeat the mistakes but that was because we should not repeat them. he never restricted us with anything and was always equal to our wavelength. On the other hand, when i had to shift to another project there was a change in my manager. The new manager always used to do his own work and never guide us. there were days when he used to push his mistakes on us so that he would not be charged by the higher authorities. he never gave us a good opportunity so that we could shine. he used to push his work on us as well and give us only limited time which was not sufficient for the completion of work. this makes the work environment hostile as we dont feel like working anymore. also we do not have a good communication with each other and the unity of team decreases. And such supervisors do not get the respect of the subordinates Finally, I conclude that few of these qualities play a very important role to be a good supervisor. As the support and interaction of the supervisor is very important to keep the team intact. The healthy work environment makes people to work happily and easily. if one does not get along with their superiors the work-life balance changes completely and one does not feel like working in that field anymore. so the supervisor plays an important role to build a happy team.
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supervisor
unless they are the Chief executive officer or the president.
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supervisor
is the one who assigns their subordinates their
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work
at guides them with it. they are
also
responsible for coaching and solving issues. For me the
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important
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quality
of a
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supervisor
are patience,
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team
building
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skills
, interactive, Confidence,
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Positive
attitude, Flexibility.

Most of the
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supervisors
need these
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qualities
to
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help
their subordinate.
For example
when
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was
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working
one of my
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supervisor
was the best.
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he
had all the
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good
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qualities
of being a
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supervisor
. In this project my
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supervisor
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helped
me a lot during my learning stages.
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he
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used
to sit beside me in the early days as
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i
was fresher while
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i
was
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working
and guide me at each and every step.
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even
when
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i
made
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mistakes
he was there to support me and correct them.
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he
taught me write mails
efficiently
and
also
to communicate with higher authorities with
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ease
.
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he
was always patient not
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only
with me
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with the entire
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team
.
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he
always encouraged us to do what we like and would
also
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help
in getting the
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work
which benefits us in the future.
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he
never berated us even when we made
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mistakes
.
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he
did scold us if we repeat the
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mistakes
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but
that was
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because
we should not repeat them.
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he
never restricted us with anything and was always equal to our wavelength.

On the other hand
, when
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i
had to shift to another project there was a
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change
in my manager. The new manager always
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used
to do his
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own
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work
and never guide us. there were days when he
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used
to push his
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on us
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so
that he would not
be charged
by the higher authorities.
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he
never gave us a
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good
opportunity
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so
that we could shine.
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he
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used
to push his
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work
on us
as well
and give us
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only
limited time which was not sufficient for the completion of
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work
.
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this
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makes
the
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work
environment hostile as we
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dont
feel like
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working
anymore.
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also
we do not have a
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good
communication with each other and the unity of
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team
decreases. And such
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supervisors
do not
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get
the respect of the
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subordinates


Finally
, I conclude that few of these
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qualities
play a
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very
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important
role to be a
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good
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supervisor
. As the support and interaction of the
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supervisor
is
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very
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important
to
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keep
the
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team
intact. The healthy
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work
environment
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makes
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people
to
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work
happily
and
easily
.
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if
one does not
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get
along with their superiors the work-life balance
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changes
completely and one does not feel like
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working
in that field anymore.
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so
the
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supervisor
plays an
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important
role to build a happy
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team
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS essay What are some important qualities of a good supervisor? Use specific details and examples to explain why the qualities are important. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
455 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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