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What are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. v.1

What are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. v. 1
The job of a supervisor requires a lot of preparation and the strong attitude in caring about the quality of work. The most relevant qualities of a supervisor will be analysed in the following paragraphs, supported by specific details and examples. Firstly, one of the most important characteristics of a supervisor is the perfect comprehension of the nature and dynamics of the work he has to manage with. Furthermore, the supervisor is a manager who leads the work of a group of people, so he has to be comprehensive on errors and at the same time, he has not to lose the control over his subordinates, letting them do unrepairable mistakes. That's a really challenging task that I'm experiencing this current year like responsible of a group of research which represents the University of Padova in a European competition called Solar Decathlon. Another fundamental quality that makes a good supervisor is the capacity of judging equally all the subordinates' works, instead of being preferential towards the ones which respect more his ideas. The quality also includes his/her focus to the deadline and attaining excellence in the team. Supervising a group of people with a strict rule is not always possible and more leadership qualities, in this case, are essential. Being able to keep balance in the team and observing the progress while learning from the past mistakes three other qualities each good supervisor should have. In conclusion, a supervisor has to be perfectly acknowledged on the tasks he's working with and he has to be a leader strict but right at the eyes of his subordinates.
The job of a
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requires
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a lot of
preparation and the strong attitude in caring about the
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quality
of
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work
. The most relevant
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qualities
of a
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supervisor
will be
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in the following paragraphs, supported by specific
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details
and examples.

Firstly
, one of the most
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important
characteristics of a
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supervisor
is the perfect comprehension of the nature and dynamics of the
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work
he
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has to
manage with.
Furthermore
, the
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supervisor
is a manager who leads the
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work
of a group of
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people
,
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so
he
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has to
be comprehensive on errors and at the same time, he has not to lose the control over his subordinates, letting them do
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unrepairable
mistakes. That's a
really
challenging task that I'm experiencing this
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current
year like
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responsible of
a group of research which represents the University of
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Padova
in a European competition called Solar Decathlon.

Another fundamental
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quality
that
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makes
a
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good
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supervisor
is the capacity of judging
equally
all the subordinates' works,
instead
of being preferential towards the ones which respect more his
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ideas
. The
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quality
also
includes his/her focus to the deadline and attaining excellence in the team. Supervising a group of
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people
with a strict
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rule
is not always possible and more leadership
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qualities
,
in this case
, are essential. Being able to
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keep
balance in the team and observing the progress while learning from the past mistakes three other
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qualities
each
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good
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supervisor
should have.

In conclusion
, a
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supervisor
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has to
be
perfectly
acknowledged on the tasks he's working
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with and
he
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has to
be a leader strict
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but
right at the eyes of his subordinates.
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16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay What are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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