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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "It is better to read books on an electronic device then it is to read traditional books on paper v.3

: "It is better to read books on an electronic device then it is to read traditional books on paper v. 3
reading on an electronic device has both pro' s and con' s. For example if a student is pretty studious and does not get easily deviated by unnecessary things then he can use a electronic device. one of the major pro' s of using electronic device is saving the paper and tree' s. When you read on an electronic device alot of space is saved, you do not need to create a mini library or make extra space for the books you purchase. Nowadays every electronic device has an in built dictionary to it, if at all there is a word which one does not understand they can easily search it by tapping on the word. The drawback of electronic device is it strains your eyes and you cannot read continuously. you need to charge your device frequently. reading in a traditional way is much more satisfying. one can mark all the points they read. many readers have a hobby of collecting books. they also helps by lending the books or exchanging of books which many of us used to do in our childhood. reading on a paper helps in more concentration or sometimes that how it is interpreted by many. it can be read at any time and any number of times.
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reading
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electronic
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device
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if a student is pretty studious and does not
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get
easily
deviated by unnecessary things then he can
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use
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
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electronic
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device
.
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one
of the major
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pro&
#039; s of using
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electronic
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device
is saving the paper and
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tree&
#039; s. When you
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read
on an
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electronic
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device
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alot
of space
is saved
, you do not need to create a mini library or
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make
extra space for the
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books
you
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purchase
. Nowadays every
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electronic
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device
has an in built dictionary to it, if at all there is a word which one does not understand they can
easily
search it by tapping on the word. The drawback of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electronic
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device
is it strains your eyes and you cannot
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read
continuously
.
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you
need to charge your
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device
frequently
.

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reading
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in a traditional way
is much more satisfying.
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one
can mark all the points they
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read
.
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many
readers have a hobby of collecting
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books
.
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they
also
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helps
by lending the
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books
or exchanging of
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books
which
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many
of us
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used
to do in our childhood.

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reading
on a paper
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helps
in more concentration or
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sometimes
that how it
is interpreted
by
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many
.
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it
can be
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read
at any time and any number of times.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS essay : "It is better to read books on an electronic device then it is to read traditional books on paper v. 3

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
213 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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