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Some people belive that university student should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and detils to explain your answer. v.2

Some people belive that university student should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and detils to explain your answer. v. 2
university class=" is" > is class=" where" & gt; where a number of students class=" get" & gt; get together to enhance their knowledge based on their intrests and skill for a promising future. attending class or not class=" is" & gt; is completely dependent on a person to person. There might be cases class=" where" & gt; where the student class=" is" & gt; is a working proffesional and for them it can be optional as juggling between and class and office class=" is" & gt; is a difficult task. I prefer attending class in the university. Firstly, By attending classes i class=" get" & gt; get to give my full concentration on the lecture and in-case of doubts we can ask them then and there. this also helps in building a good teacher student relationship. The interaction of the faculty impacts the learning of the student. As the teachers know class=" where" & gt; where the student class=" is" & gt; is making mistakes and weak points of a student as they see them in the class they can help the students by correcting and mending the students mistakes. it will be very helpful for the students to grow and excel in their career or intrests. Secondly, student to student interaction class=" is" & gt; is also very important. it not only helps in building a social life but also builds a good rapo with them, Especially when you are new to the place. Many students are scared while speaking with people and find themseleves nervous when they interact with others. this helps in learning, language and good social interaction. when we interact with other students we increase our thinking and thought process and arrange it accordingly. And also universities have bunch of programs or extra curicular ativities which makes the study more enthusiastic and intresting this cannot be done if we dont attend classes. also some students are very intelligent so they can easily study and class=" get" & gt; get good score and some might need help for them attending classes might class=" get" & gt; get better results. And in my case i tend to class=" get" & gt; get diviated from my studies if am not under proper guidance so classes helps me with good concentration. Lastly, we cannot choose for others as everyone has their own beliefs and responsibilities so it depends if people want to go to the classes or not. so classes can be made optional for such students who has to juggle between their jobs andd studies. some might dis-continue thier studies due to personal reasons. Nowadays without attending classes also people can complete their studies. As long as they are confident about themselves that they might be good at what they are doing attending class might be optional.
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together to enhance their knowledge based on their
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intrests
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skill
for a promising future.
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attending
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or not
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and for them it can be optional as juggling between and
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and office
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in the university.

Firstly
, By attending
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i
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to give my full concentration on the lecture and in-case of doubts we can ask them then and there.
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this
also
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helps
in building a
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good
teacher
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student
relationship. The interaction of the faculty impacts the learning of the
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student
. As the teachers know
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where&quot
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student
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student
as they
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see
them in the
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class
they can
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help
the
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students
by correcting and mending the
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students
mistakes.
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it
will be
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very
helpful for the
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students
to grow and excel in their career or
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intrests
.

Secondly
,
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student
to
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interaction
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also
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very
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important
.
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it
not
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only
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helps
in building a social life
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but
also
builds a
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good
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rapo
with them,
Especially
when you are new to the place.
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students
are scared
while speaking with
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people
and find
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themseleves
nervous when they interact with others.
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this
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helps
in learning, language and
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good
social interaction.
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when
we interact with other
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students
we increase our thinking and
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thought
process and arrange it
accordingly
. And
also
universities have
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bunch of
programs or extra
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curicular
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ativities
which
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makes
the
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study
more enthusiastic and
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intresting
this cannot
be done
if we
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dont
attend
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classes
.
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also
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some
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students
are
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very
intelligent
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so
they can
easily
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study
and
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get
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good
score and
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some
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might
need
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help
for them attending
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classes
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might
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better results. And in my case
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tend to
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diviated
from my
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studies
if am not under proper guidance
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so
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classes
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helps
me with
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good
concentration.

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, we cannot choose for others as everyone has their
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own
beliefs and responsibilities
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so
it
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depends
if
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people
want to go to the
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classes
or not.
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so
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classes
can
be made
optional for such
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students
who
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has
to juggle between their jobs
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andd
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studies
.
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some
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might
dis-continue
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thier
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studies
due to personal reasons. Nowadays without attending
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classes
also
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people
can complete their
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studies
.
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As
long as they are confident about themselves that they
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might
be
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good
at what they are
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going attending".
doing attending
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class
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might
be optional.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
51Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
72Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people belive that university student should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and detils to explain your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
469 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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