In this essay, I will express the extent to which I agree with whether companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. I will furthermore explain the reasons for my opinion. To begin with, I strongly agree with the given statement. Companies, in my opinion, are the most capable to provide facilities. Not only this but employees may benefit greatly from such facilities.
Firstly, since companies undoubtedly have the necessary amount of revenue required to provide such facilities they are the most capable to do so. In addition, they are well suited to sustain such facilities as a result of their experience obtained from operating a company. This means it is more likely a community can benefit from a facility run by a company as opposed to an individual. For instance, a company like 'fitness first' would be in more of a capable position to provide the relevant facilities to communities than an average person.
Furthermore, many companies retain workers to perform tasks that may be stressful or mundane. Although the companies are not obligated to provide facilities for communities, I adamantly believe that them doing so would help in the physical and social health of the people in the community. Such an example is those that are employed in the computer programming sector.
In conclusion, companies being the most well equipped, are the most capable to provide facilities to communities in order to promote the physical and social well being and I firmly agree that because of the reasons that I have stated that companies should indeed provide sports and social facilities.
In this essay, I will express the extent to which I
agree
with whether
companies
should
provide
sports and
social
facilities for local
communities
. I will
furthermore
explain
the reasons for my opinion. To
begin
with, I
strongly
agree
with the
given
statement.
Companies
, in my opinion, are the most
capable
to
provide
facilities. Not
only
this
but
employees may benefit
greatly
from such facilities.
Firstly
, since
companies
undoubtedly
have the necessary amount of revenue required to
provide
such facilities they are the most
capable
to do
so
.
In addition
, they are well suited to sustain such facilities
as a result
of their experience obtained from operating a
company
. This means it is more likely a
community
can benefit from a facility run by a
company
as opposed to an individual.
For instance
, a
company
like 'fitness
first
' would be in more of a
capable
position to
provide
the relevant facilities to
communities
than an average person.
Furthermore
,
many
companies
retain workers to perform tasks that may be stressful or mundane. Although the
companies
are not obligated to
provide
facilities for
communities
, I
adamantly
believe that them doing
so
would
help
in the physical and
social
health of the
people
in the
community
. Such an example is those that
are employed
in the computer programming sector.
In conclusion
,
companies
being the most
well equipped
, are the most
capable
to
provide
facilities to
communities
in order to promote the physical and
social
well being
and I
firmly
agree
that
because
of the reasons that I have stated that
companies
should
indeed
provide
sports and
social
facilities.
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