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“Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree? ” v.6

“Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. ” v. 6
It is argued that economically backward nations should be helped by developed countries on humanitarian relief during natural calamities. This essay strongly agrees with the statements because wealthy nations are well equipped with resources and technology to go through catastrophes, also, their medical systems could help repel the disasters. To begin with, developed countries are prepared to deal with disasters which are not man-made. They have a surplus of basic necessities like drinkable water and non-perishable foods which are of utmost importance when a calamity strikes. Along with the latest technology which helps with the forecast and ways to minimize impact, wealthy nations have specially trained people to help during the aftermath. For instance, the European Union has large aircrafts which help carry the supplies to areas where the infrastructure has been hit by the disaster. Additionally, developed nations have the superior medical technology. Fighting the spread of epidemics is crucial after a natural calamity to reduce the death toll. Well-to-do nations have mobile medical units which help set up clinics in an efficient and swift manner wherever needed. For example, the United States of America have a special department US-AID and their sole purpose is to lead the rescue operations internationally where they lack manpower to deal with calamities. In conclusion, the financially solid countries should definitely assist the developing and third-world states in empathetic terms during the natural disasters. This is because they are financially stable due to which they have spare resources and their proficiency in medicine benefits the suffering nation from spread of disease
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is argued
that
economically
backward
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nations
should be
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helped
by
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developed countries
on humanitarian relief during natural calamities. This essay
strongly
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agrees
with the statements
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because
wealthy
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nations
are
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well equipped
with resources and technology to go through catastrophes,
also
, their medical systems could
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help
repel the disasters.

To
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begin
with,
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developed countries
are prepared
to deal with disasters which are not
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man
-made. They have a surplus of
Consider using "necessities".
basic necessities
like drinkable water and non-perishable foods which are of utmost importance when a calamity strikes. Along with the latest technology which
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helps
with the forecast and ways to minimize impact, wealthy
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nations
have
specially
trained
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
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help
during the aftermath.
For instance
, the European Union has large
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aircrafts
which
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help
carry the supplies to areas where the infrastructure has
been hit
by the disaster.

Additionally
, developed
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nations
have the superior medical technology. Fighting the spread of epidemics is crucial after a natural calamity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the death toll. Well-to-do
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nations
have mobile medical units which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
set up clinics in an efficient and swift manner wherever needed.
For example
, the United States of America have a special department US-AID and their sole purpose is to lead the rescue operations
internationally
where they lack manpower to deal with calamities.

In conclusion
, the
financially
solid countries should definitely assist the developing and third-world states in empathetic terms during the natural disasters. This is
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because
they are
financially
stable due to which they have spare resources and their proficiency in medicine benefits the suffering
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nation
from spread of
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disease
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay “Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. ” v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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