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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, other believes that they can learn new better through other media. v. 4
There is no doubt that newspapers are one of the most common ways to get access to information. While some regarded them as the best source, others believe that they can get the news via better types of media. Both sides of the issues will be under discussion within the scope of this essay. On one hand, newspapers do have numerous advantages compared to other media. First, it is affordable, with tons of these get printed every day, their prices are much cheaper than the cost of television or radio and the poor can easily get one each day. Second, its reliability, usually, every news has to make it through serious censorship controlled by the government before getting printed as an article so you can almost be sure that everything you read is true. And finally, people love its convenience, with a newspaper, you can fold and carry it to nearly everywhere without the need to get access to Wifi or problems like that. That's why a number of people still choose newspapers as their news source. On the other hand, I can understand the argument against this view. The main reason is that we are fed up with the boredom we get when reading newspapers. In other types of media, such as television or the Internet, information is usually presented in a more attractive and appealing way. Additionally, when reading online news, we can pick those that really match our interests and hobbies rather than just skim through all the boring articles we see in the newspapers. This explains why teenagers are more into other types of media than newspapers. To conclude, both newspapers and other media have their own advantages. People of all ages should take into account which fits the best for them so that they can enjoy learning the news in the most effective way.
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are one of the most common ways to
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get
access to information. While
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regarded them as the best source, others believe that they can
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get
the
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news
via better types of
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. Both sides of the issues will be under discussion within the scope of this essay.

On one hand,
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newspapers
do have numerous advantages compared to
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other
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media
.
First
, it is affordable, with tons of these
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get
printed every day, their prices are much cheaper than the cost of television or radio and the poor can
easily
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get
one each day. Second, its reliability,
usually
, every
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news
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has to
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make
it through serious censorship controlled by the
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government
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before
getting printed as an article
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so
you can almost be sure that everything you read is true. And
finally
,
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people
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love
its convenience, with a
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newspaper
, you can fold and carry it to
nearly
everywhere without the need to
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get
access to
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or problems like that. That's why a number of
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people
still
choose
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newspapers
as their
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source.

On the
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other
hand, I can understand the argument against this view. The main reason is that we
are fed
up with the boredom we
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get
when reading
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newspapers
. In
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other
types of
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media
, such as television or the Internet, information is
usually
presented in a more attractive and appealing way.
Additionally
, when reading online
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news
, we can pick those that
really
match our interests and hobbies
rather
than
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just
skim through all the boring articles we
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see
in the
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newspapers
. This
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explains
why
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teenagers
are more into
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other
types of
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media
than newspapers.

To conclude
, both
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newspapers
and
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other
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media
have their
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own
advantages.
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People
of all ages should take into account which fits the best for them
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so
that they can enjoy learning the
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news
in the most effective way.
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IELTS essay Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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