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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.9

Having lots of money not always can make a person happy. I am totally agree with that statement since there are many important things which can't be purchased with the money. For example person can't buy good health or life-partner. I have a very good friend of mine who has built strong carier in Oil and Gas field and set up succesfull business. He is no longer able to continue with job and business since doctors detected serious heart dicease. He is on medical treatment and not capable of doing any stress related job or business. In fact it; s not reommended for him to work more than couple of hours per day. His life is full of many food limitations and he has to live strugling with the dicease. Another example is related to my friend who can't fi

Having lots of money not always can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a person happy. I am totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with that statement since there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 things which can't be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 with the money. For example
 person can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health or life-partner. I have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 friend of mine who has built strong Possible spelling mistake found.careercarrierCarterCarrierCartierCarver
carier
 in Oil and Gas field and set up Possible spelling mistake found.successfulsuccessfully
succesfull
 business. He is no longer able to continue with job and business since doctors detected serious heart Possible spelling mistake found.diseasedecease
dicease
. He is on medical treatment and not capable of doing any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 related job or business. In The comma is probably missing here: “fact, it”.fact, it
fact it
; s not Possible spelling mistake found.recommended
reommended
 for him to work more than It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 hours per day. His life is full of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 food Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).limitations, and
limitations and
 he This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
Possible spelling mistake found.struggling
strugling
 with the Possible spelling mistake found.diseasedecease
dicease
.

Another example is related
 to my friend who can't Possible spelling mistake found.phiFIIifFMFBI
fi