Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement v.4
Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. to this statement v. 4
Money do not fundamentally insured prosperity. In my opinion, there are merits to this statement, however, there are also factors that I do not agree with.
First of all, contentment is subjective. This means that, what makes you happy hold no value to others. For instance, buying expensive things, to some this what makes them delighted, but to others having a complete family makes them contented. Thus, being fortunate does not always a measure of happiness.
On the contrary, people who are affluent tend to acquire pleasure effortlessly. This is because wealth plays an essential role in obtaining what they desire to make them feel joyful. For example, billionaires seem very fortunate that they possess all the things they have and purchasing brings joy to everyone of them. Hence, this only dispels that money correlates with happiness.
In conclusion, money is something, but not everything. It gives very little long term satisfaction. True happiness resides on every good action that every individual makes.
Money do not
fundamentally
insured prosperity. In my opinion, there are merits to this statement,
however
, there are
also
factors that I do not
agree
with.
First of all
, contentment is subjective. This means that, what
makes
you happy hold no value to others.
For instance
, buying expensive things, to
some
this what
makes
them delighted,
but
to others having a complete family
makes
them contented.
Thus
, being fortunate does not always a measure of happiness.
On the contrary
,
people
who are affluent tend to acquire pleasure
effortlessly
. This is
because
wealth plays an essential role in obtaining what they desire to
make
them feel joyful.
For example
, billionaires seem
very
fortunate that they possess all the things they have and purchasing brings joy to
everyone
of them.
Hence
, this
only
dispels that money correlates with happiness.
In conclusion
, money is something,
but
not everything. It gives
very
little
long term satisfaction. True happiness resides on every
good
action that every individual
makes
.
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5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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