Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement v.3
Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. to this statement v. 3
In todays world, people are very busy chasing money. It is believed by many that money can make one gleeful in the world. However, I partially agree with this view as there are many factors which lead to contentment and not just wealth.
Firstly, it is very important to have peace of mind in order to be happy. No matter how much money or resources one can obtain, if he or she does not have inner tranquility, life becomes stressful and difficult. For instance, one of my friend has a very successful career and is very opulent, nevertheless, his job does not permit work-life balance leading to ill health and tensions.
Secondly, being around with family or loved ones is a very comforting feeling, which wealth cannot guaranty.
For example, when my parents had limited income, we were still happy, as all of us were together with compassion and care towards each other. Whereas, today we are all economically well settled, we live apart and are not as happy.
On the other hand, money plays a vital role in providing comforts and facilities. People who have an abundance of resources feel safer and happier to some extent. For instance, I was exuberant for some days when I bought a new car. Hence, I believe that money is one of the important aspects of being more cheerful, albeit not the only way.
To conclude, I opine that having lots of money and resources do not guarantee happiness and are not elementary for contentment. Besides, it is imperative to be internally satisfied and be surrounded by people who care which brings true joy. Nonetheless, riches do proffer security and happiness temporarily.
In
todays
world,
people
are
very
busy chasing
money
. It
is believed
by
many
that
money
can
make
one gleeful in the world.
However
, I
partially
agree
with this view as there are
many
factors which lead to contentment and not
just
wealth.
Firstly
, it is
very
important
to have peace of mind in order to be happy. No matter how much
money
or resources one can obtain, if he or she does not have inner tranquility, life becomes stressful and difficult.
For instance
, one of my friend has a
very
successful career and is
very
opulent,
nevertheless
, his job does not permit work-life balance leading to ill health and tensions.
Secondly
, being around with family or
loved
ones is a
very
comforting feeling, which wealth cannot guaranty.
For example
, when my parents had limited income, we were
still
happy, as all of us were together with compassion and care towards each other. Whereas,
today
we are all
economically
well settled, we
live
apart and are not as happy.
On the other hand
,
money
plays a vital role in providing comforts and facilities.
People
who have an abundance of resources feel safer and happier to
some
extent.
For instance
, I was exuberant for
some
days when I
bought
a new car.
Hence
, I believe that
money
is one of the
important
aspects of being more cheerful, albeit not the
only
way.
To conclude
, I opine that having lots of
money
and resources do not guarantee happiness and are not elementary for contentment.
Besides
, it is imperative to be
internally
satisfied and
be surrounded
by
people
who care which brings true joy. Nonetheless, riches do proffer security and happiness
temporarily
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes