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We have developed into a throwaway society. What can be done to overcome the problems? v.1

We have developed into a throwaway society. What can be done to overcome the problems? v. 1
Now, we are faced with tremendous problems caused by humankind which are impacted to our community to become a throwaway society. However, these issues can be tackled through new inventions by the government like to reduce an overwhelming amount of wastages or effective measures. There are plenty of ways to avoid from such a fundamental problem. The best solution for this use a technology centric lifestyle to benefit of our community. For instance, create devices to change the single-use products to recyclable items. Also, produce a durable goods are the best approach which can deal with adverse impacts and hazardous wastes. Furthermore, there is a school of thought that government should lessen the most production. On the other hand, most countries’ cumulative efforts doesn’t enough to revert the damage. Other sensible steps to address this issue depends not only for the government, also for us. People should try reduce to use non-recyclable packets, bags and goods as much as possible. In school, pupils must be aware about their responsibilities in nation to prospect it. Individuals should classify household wastes as recyclable and non-recyclable and recyclable wastes should be used to produce new products. In conclusion, there is not a shadow of doubt that continues development of technology and our negligence allow for creation of a throwaway culture. But there is the possibility that new alterations and views of humankind to our society help to tackle this problems.
Now
, we
are faced
with tremendous problems caused by humankind which
are impacted
to our community to become a throwaway society.
However
, these issues can
be tackled
through new inventions by the
government
like to
reduce
an overwhelming amount of
wastages
or effective measures.

There are
plenty
of ways to avoid from such a fundamental problem. The best solution for this
use
a technology centric lifestyle to benefit of our community.
For instance
, create devices to
change
the single-
use
products to recyclable items.
Also
, produce a durable
goods
are the best approach which can deal with adverse impacts and hazardous wastes.
Furthermore
, there is a school of
thought
that
government
should lessen the most production.
On the other hand
, most countries’ cumulative efforts doesn’t
enough
to revert the damage.

Other sensible steps to address this issue
depends
not
only
for the
government
,
also
for us.
People
should try
reduce
to
use
non-recyclable packets, bags and
goods
as much as possible.

In school, pupils
must
be aware about their responsibilities in nation to prospect it. Individuals should classify household wastes as recyclable and non-recyclable and recyclable wastes should be
used
to produce new products.

In conclusion
, there is not a shadow of doubt that continues development of technology and our negligence
allow
for creation of a throwaway culture.
But
there is the possibility that new alterations and views of humankind to our society
help
to tackle
this
problems.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay We have developed into a throwaway society. What can be done to overcome the problems? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
237 words
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