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We are living in a throwaway society. What are the reasons for the creation of ‘throwaway societies’ and what future impacts can it have? v.1

We are living in a throwaway society. What are the reasons for the creation of ‘throwaway societies’ and what future impacts can it have? v. 1
Waste disposal problems are increasing at an alarming rate today. Even though people are more educated than before, they act like ignorant in many circumstances in term of throwaway culture. This essay examines the several reasons behind the creation of these throwaway societies and the results of this in the future. On the one hand, there are some facts which lead to the formation of choked societies with waste products. Firstly, the attitude and cultural practice of the public; that is, they throw away unwanted things wherever they want to pretend that it is their right and something they got from their ancestors. Hence, they do not have the feeling of ‘ourselves’ about the surroundings. Secondly, scarcity of places for proper waste disposal: since population explosion exists and people accommodates in flats in cities where there are not enough places or surroundings compared to village areas and they discard things here and there. In addition, lack of proper waste segregation system by the authorities is the important reason for this menace. Moreover, the absence of strict legislation increases its severity. On the other hand, these danger practices lead to severe impacts on several aspects of the community. First and foremost problem caused by this act is environmental pollution. With these waste products like food waste, plastics, metals, chemicals etc, environment get choked and polluted and ends up in water pollution, air pollution etc. and as a result, it has a pernicious influence on the health of human as well as other creations on the earth. For instance, these pollutants cause lung problems, respiratory problems, cancers etc. Another fact is that it leads to communicable diseases. That is, these accumulated wastages are the best breeding places for bacteria, viruses and pathogens and spread various diseases. Finally, this throwaway culture discards the beauty of our nature and also affects the ecosystem of the environment. In conclusion, change in the attitude of people is the panacea for this menace. It is not an instantly aroused issue so that it cannot be solved immediately. Government and people should work hand in hand to wipe off this ban from our society.
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Waste
disposal
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problems
are increasing at an alarming rate
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today
.
Even though
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people
are more educated than
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before
, they act like ignorant in
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many
circumstances in term of throwaway culture. This essay examines the several reasons behind the creation of these throwaway societies and the results of this in the future.

On the one
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hand
, there are
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some
facts which lead to the formation of choked societies with
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waste
products.
Firstly
, the attitude and cultural practice of the public;
that is
, they throw away unwanted things wherever they want to pretend that it is their right and something they
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got
from their ancestors.
Hence
, they do not have the feeling of ‘ourselves’ about the surroundings.
Secondly
, scarcity of places for proper
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waste
disposal: since population explosion exists and
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people
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accommodates
in flats in cities where there are not
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enough
places or surroundings compared to village
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areas and
they discard things here and there.
In addition
, lack of proper
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waste
segregation system by the authorities is the
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important
reason for this menace.
Moreover
, the absence of strict legislation increases its severity.

On the other
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hand
, these
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danger
practices lead to severe impacts on several aspects of the community.
First
and foremost
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problem
caused by this act is environmental pollution. With these
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waste
products like food
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waste
, plastics, metals, chemicals etc, environment
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get
choked and polluted and ends up in water pollution, air pollution etc. and
as a result
, it has a pernicious influence on the health of human
as well
as other creations on the earth.
For instance
, these pollutants cause lung
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problems
, respiratory
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problems
, cancers etc. Another fact is that it leads to communicable diseases.
That is
, these accumulated
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wastages
are the best breeding places for bacteria, viruses and pathogens and spread various diseases.
Finally
, this throwaway culture discards the beauty of our nature and
also
affects the ecosystem of the environment.

In conclusion
,
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change
in the attitude of
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people
is the panacea for this menace. It is not an
instantly
aroused issue
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so
that it cannot
be solved
immediately.
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Government
and
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people
should work
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hand
in
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hand
to wipe off this ban from our society.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay We are living in a throwaway society. What are the reasons for the creation of ‘throwaway societies’ and what future impacts can it have? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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