There is an argument about students who are moving and studying abroad to have a better education. This essay will discuss both views and believes that it is beneficial to further studies overseas.
There are many downsides of pursuing education in another country, one is the expensive tuition fee and standard of living. Students in a foreign country are sometimes forced to have multiple jobs in order to cope with paying school fees as well as to live. Filipino students who are continuously studying in United Kingdom for example. They were interviewed by a broadcasting network about their struggles of paying bills. They mentioned that they do not get any days off in a week to enable them to survive.
On the other hand, to study and live in a different country is also fulfilling once you have achieved an advanced and quality education. Education might be costly, but once a learner have the diploma, it could unfold tons of priceless opportunities. For instance, an Asian student who pursued masteral degree in Kutztown University of Pensylvannia in United States have been offered jobs from various companies and countries. The student has also helped his motherland by sharing knowledge to the residents as an educator.
In conclusion, continuing study, especially in a foreign land will indeed amount to hundreds or even thousands however, education is also so precious that no one can take it away from someone. Therefore, the writer strongly believes that it is more beneficial compared to learning in your own country.
There is an argument about
students
who are moving and studying abroad to have a better
education
. This essay will discuss both views and believes that it is beneficial to
further
studies overseas.
There are
many
downsides of pursuing
education
in another
country
, one is the expensive tuition fee and standard of living.
Students
in a foreign
country
are
sometimes
forced to have multiple jobs in order to cope with paying school fees
as well
as to
live
. Filipino
students
who are
continuously
studying
in United Kingdom
for example
. They
were interviewed
by a broadcasting network about their struggles of paying bills. They mentioned that they do not
get
any days off in a week to enable them to survive.
On the other hand
, to study and
live
in a
different
country
is
also
fulfilling once you have achieved an advanced and quality
education
.
Education
might be costly,
but
once a learner have the diploma, it could unfold tons of priceless opportunities.
For instance
, an Asian
student
who pursued
masteral
degree in
Kutztown
University of
Pensylvannia
in United States
have
been offered
jobs from various
companies
and
countries
. The
student
has
also
helped
his motherland by sharing knowledge to the residents as an educator.
In conclusion
, continuing study,
especially
in a foreign land will
indeed
amount to hundreds or even thousands
however
,
education
is
also
so
precious that no one can take it away from someone.
Therefore
, the writer
strongly
believes that it is more beneficial compared to learning in your
own
country
.
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