Video games have become very popular amongst the younger generation in recent times. Some parents are worried regarding the harmful effects these games would have over children, while others would go to lengths explaining the benefits of modern games. In my opinion computer games has an adverse effect on overall physical as well as mental health of youngsters and this essay would discuss those health issues in detail.
Modern games require a lot of strategy and planning to progress further in the game. Some would argue that, this helps induce critical thinking in young minds and thus have a positive impact. However, many games contain extreme violence and bloodshed, which might have negative impacts on a child's personality. Hence, due to the obscene content, video games do more harm than good.
Also there are issues related to health and fitness of these gamers. As per a recent study by the WHO, children spend on an average 3 to 4 hours daily playing games. Such extended periods sitting across the screen not only puts stress on the eyes, but also the lack of physical activity are one of the reasons why the younger population is mostly obese.
To summarise, this essay has discussed how the violent content in games may have adverse effects on the child's behaviour and lack of physical exercise due to prolonged hours of gaming is one of the causes of obesity in children. All in all, the essay concludes that these virtual games indeed have adverse negative impacts on the younger section of society
Video
games
have become
very
popular amongst the younger generation in recent times.
Some
parents
are worried
regarding the harmful effects these
games
would have over children, while others would go to lengths explaining the benefits of modern
games
. In my opinion computer
games
has an adverse effect on
overall
physical
as well
as mental health of youngsters and this essay would discuss those health issues in detail.
Modern
games
require
a lot of
strategy and planning to progress
further
in the game.
Some
would argue that, this
helps
induce critical thinking in young minds and
thus
have a
positive
impact.
However
,
many
games
contain extreme violence and bloodshed, which might have
negative
impacts on a child's personality.
Hence
, due to the obscene content, video
games
do more harm than
good
.
Also
there are issues related to health and fitness of these gamers. As per a recent study by the WHO, children spend on an average 3 to 4 hours daily playing
games
. Such extended periods sitting across the screen not
only
puts
stress
on the eyes,
but
also
the lack of physical activity are one of the reasons why the younger population is
mostly
obese.
To
summarise
, this essay has discussed how the violent content in
games
may have adverse effects on the child's
behaviour
and lack of physical exercise due to prolonged hours of gaming is one of the causes of obesity in children. All in all, the essay concludes that these virtual
games
indeed
have adverse
negative
impacts on the younger section of
society
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