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University experience is more important than a university degree some people argue that university life is much important than an education degree in job market. do you agree or not agree v.1

University experience is more important than a university degree some people argue that university life is much important than an education degree in job market. do you agree or not agree v. 1
Globally, it has been observed that the university participation training is more significant part and more than a university degree and in resent years, governments have provided a lot of money for learning to produce a greet generation to be right position of jobs. They design collage and university with high quality of science and information also, in this essay, I will argue about the effect of literacy and wisdom on the job. It is true that scholarship may be the foundation of good maturity government has devoted more time to developing a culture around schools, collages and universities and this is best for us as a result teaching person educated person is able to wonder in world because who have knowledge as well as they can work somewhere, additionally, literacy masses can handle any difficulties in our path in life because we have proper technique, moreover, people who have real skills, tools and technique will be successful in any sector of industry. In other hand the people who have skill are more employable than, people, who do not have a performance sense as they cannot be considered your resume, the company’s management is required struggle contact, for example, experts can solve the stress of complex issues, who have skills about their field they can control that part like aviation engine task, rail line, as well as critical movement, which is usefully their skill. In conclusion, there is a strong relationship between discipline and skill for anyone are looking for real success in this job, study depends on the theory, but training is based on practical application, educations and training are the extremely important to rich achievement and high quality in the job.
Globally, it has
been observed
that the
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university
participation training is more significant part and more than a
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university
degree and in resent years,
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governments
have provided
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a lot of
money for learning to produce
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a greet
generation to be right position of jobs. They design collage and
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university
with high quality of science and information
also
, in this essay, I will argue about the effect of literacy and wisdom on the job.

It is true that scholarship may be the foundation of
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good
maturity
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
has devoted more time to developing a culture around schools, collages and
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universities
and this is best for us
as a result
teaching person educated person is able to wonder in world
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because
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who
have knowledge
as well
as they can work somewhere,
additionally
, literacy masses can handle any difficulties in our path in life
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because
we have proper technique,
moreover
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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who
have real
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skills
, tools and technique will be successful in any sector of industry.

In other hand the
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people
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who
have
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skill
are more employable than,
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people
,
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who
do not have a performance sense as they cannot
be considered
your resume, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s management
is required
struggle contact,
for example
, experts can solve the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
of complex issues,
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who
have
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skills
about their field they can control that part like aviation engine task, rail line,
as well
as critical movement, which is
usefully
their
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skill
.

In conclusion
, there is a strong relationship between discipline and
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skill
for anyone
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are
looking for real success in this job, study depends on the theory,
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but
training
is based
on practical application, educations and training are the
extremely
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important
to rich achievement and high quality in the job.
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IELTS essay University experience is more important than a university degree some people argue that university life is much important than an education degree in job market. do you agree or not agree v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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