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University education should be free for all students regardless of background. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

University education should be free for all students regardless of background. with this statement? v. 1
In recent years, educations are only key support for people to learn and move in with technology. The technically strong person lives better life style. To make it happen University education should free for all students, regardless of any background and culture. In this essay I will discuss some pros and cons to clarify it and make my opinion. To start with, free university education helps more people to take education in their interested fields and feel fairer, knowledgeable, and get a change to mingle in business commodity with great amount confidence. In addition to that it improves the countries economic growth in the Business World. On the opposite side, it might create contractions among equals to prove intelligence in the work field. This situation quite challenging for employers to maintain employee mental satisfaction and feel happy to get good output it indirectly increase Economic growth ratio. Go on to second thought, Education is for all and not for a particular group or class of societies. All groups of people required equal study options and facilities to get their education in their interested streams. More qualified person can live life in a better way with controlled satisfaction. As instance number of individuals belongs to lower class couldn't afford delay food, belongings and fight to meet ends, but equal opportunity should change this state. In addition to that main challenge in front of official authorities is to arrange, distribute finance, and create equal opportunities. As a research state, if a group of people did computer programming than all of them required jobs in their respective fields. Could government make it happen in a particular time frame? In conclusion, it is not easy to provide free education for each one, but university board and government can make it happen with proper planning and strategies. I agree that University education should free for all students regardless of background.
In recent years,
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educations
are
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only
key support for
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people
to learn and
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move
in with technology. The
technically
strong person
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lives
better life style. To
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make
it happen
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University
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education
should
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free
for all students, regardless of any background and culture. In this essay I will discuss
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some
pros and cons to clarify it and
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make
my opinion.

To
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start
with,
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free
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university
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education
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helps
more
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people
to take
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education
in their interested fields and feel fairer, knowledgeable, and
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get
a
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change
to mingle in business commodity with great amount confidence.
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to that it
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improves
the countries economic growth in the Business World.

On the opposite side, it might create contractions among
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equals
to prove intelligence in the work field. This situation quite challenging for employers to maintain employee mental satisfaction and feel happy to
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get
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good
output it
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increase
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Go on to second
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,
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Education
is for all and not for a particular group or
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class
of societies. All groups of
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people
required
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equal
study options and facilities to
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get
their
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education
in their interested streams. More qualified person can
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live
life in a better way with controlled satisfaction. As instance number of individuals belongs to lower
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class
couldn't afford delay food, belongings and fight to
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meet
ends,
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but
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equal
opportunity should
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change
this state.

In addition
to that main challenge in front of official authorities is to arrange, distribute finance, and create
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equal
opportunities. As a research state, if a group of
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people
did computer programming than all of them required jobs in their respective fields. Could
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government
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make
it happen in a particular time frame?

In conclusion
, it is not easy to provide
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free
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education
for each one,
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but
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university
board and
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government
can
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make
it happen with proper planning and strategies. I
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that
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University
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education
should
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free
for all students regardless of background.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay University education should be free for all students regardless of background. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
315 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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