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Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. v. 1
Currently, some kind of animals or plants are endangering for that humans trying to save some varies of theirs from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. I disagree this statement. Further on, Im going to express about this theme, this essay will analyze and supply detailed sentiments perfectly. Surprisingly, humanbeings are trying to save animals due to fact that endangiring day by day so to deliver to coming generation. And also, this actions aid to save change of nature especially rotate of cycle smoothly. That activities not waste of valuable resourses on the other hand this action hold cycle. For instance animals which are polar bear, deer, wolf and bear - this animals playing a big role of nature cycle. In order to, via this way individuals keep valuable resouces in that case our environment is go on rising to good sides. For example, to live this animals need to forest. According to this condition people create new forest or not try to cut have this one. So, we keep there endangiring animals and also green areas perfectly if try to harder without waste of valuable resources or not damage to them. In conclusion, trying to keep endangiring animals or other all live cell varies from extniction is a spend of valuable resources is found disagree from point of my view. I gave my opinions, reasons, points below ( perfectly ).
Currently
,
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some
kind of
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animals
or plants are endangering for that humans trying to save
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some
varies of theirs from extinction is a waste of
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valuable
resources. I disagree this statement.
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on,
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going to express about this theme, this essay will analyze and supply detailed sentiments
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.

Surprisingly
,
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humanbeings
are trying to save
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animals
due to fact that
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endangiring
day by day
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so
to deliver to coming generation. And
also
, this actions aid to save
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change
of nature
especially
rotate of cycle
smoothly
. That activities not waste of
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valuable
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resourses
on the other hand
this action hold cycle.
For instance
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animals
which are polar bear, deer, wolf and bear
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-
this
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animals
playing a
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big
role of nature cycle.

In order to, via this way individuals
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keep
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valuable
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resouces
in that case
our environment is
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go
on rising to
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good
sides.
For example
, to
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live
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this
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animals
need to forest. According to this condition
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people
create new forest or not try to
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cut
have this one.
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So
, we
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keep
there
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endangiring
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animals
and
also
green areas
perfectly
if try to harder without waste of
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valuable
resources or not damage to them.

In conclusion
, trying to
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keep
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endangiring
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animals
or other all
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live
cell varies from
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extniction
is a spend of
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valuable
resources
is found
disagree from point of my view. I gave my opinions, reasons, points below
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11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
232 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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