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Every year more students to study online rather than attend classes on campus What you think the causes of this trends? What are the solution for that v.1

Every year more students to study online rather than attend classes on campus What you think the causes of this trends? What are the solution for that v. 1
The 21st century is known for technology. Now a days students are studying online rather going to classes on campus. Technology is growing day by day and people are mostly dependent on technology, students choose online classes and believe that they would get more knowledge compare to classes on campus. At some extend I believe that studying online is more helpful rather attending classes on campus. The essay below will elaborate more on the reason If we go back 2 decades, there were only books, there were no internet or any advance technology, so students use to follow what professor use to teach them, for some students it would be very difficult to understand or maybe grasping power is low, there were very few examples of any statements understand. For example, my father doesn't have so many facility what I have today. If he wants to understand any meaning he use hand dictionary, but now I use Google to find out the meaning and pronunciation. This is how it made it easy for us The campus is also important when we need field experience professor to explain live projects or any situation and sometimes it is difficult to understand few topics online so we physical explanation. For example practical can't be done online so we need a place where we can perform experiments in the lab. So is also campus important for students In conclusion, campus and online study both are important to help to understand easy
The 21st century
is known
for
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technology
.
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Now a days
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students
are studying
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online
rather
going to
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classes
on
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campus
.
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Technology
is growing day by day and
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people
are
mostly
dependent on
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technology
,
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students
choose
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online
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classes
and believe that they would
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get
more knowledge compare to
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classes
on
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campus
. At
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some
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extend
I believe that studying
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online
is more helpful
rather
attending
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classes
on
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campus
. The essay below will elaborate more on the reason

If we go back 2 decades, there were
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only
books, there were no internet or any advance
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technology
,
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so
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students
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use
to follow what professor
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use to
teach them, for
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some
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students
it would be
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very
difficult to
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understand
or maybe grasping power is low, there were
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very
few examples of any statements
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understand
.
For example
, my father doesn't have
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so
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many facility
what I have
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today
. If he wants to
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understand
any meaning he
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use
hand dictionary,
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but
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now
I
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use
Google to find out the meaning and pronunciation. This is how it made it easy for
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us


The
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campus
is
also
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important
when we need field experience professor to
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explain
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live
projects or any situation and
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sometimes
it is difficult to
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understand
few topics
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online
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so
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we physical
explanation.
For example
practical can't
be done
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online
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so
we need a place where we can perform experiments in the lab.
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So
is
also
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campus
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important
for
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students


In conclusion
,
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campus
and
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online
study both are
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important
to
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help
to
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understand
easy
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay Every year more students to study online rather than attend classes on campus What you think the causes of this trends? What are the solution for that v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
246 words
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6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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