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Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.3

Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. v. 3
Currently, some kind of animals or plants are endangering for that humans trying to save some variation of theirs from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. I disagree this statement. Further on, I'm going to express about this theme, this essay will analyse and supply detailed sentiments perfectly. Surprisingly, human beings are trying to save animals due to the fact that endangering day by day so to deliver to the coming generation. And also, this actions aid to save changes of nature, especially rotate of the cycle smoothly. That activity, doesn't waste of valuable resources on the other hand, this action holds cycle. For instance, animals which are polar bear, deer, wolf and bear - this animals playing a big role of nature cycle. In order to, via this way individuals keep valuable resources in that case our environment is going on rising to good sides. For example, to live this animal need to forest. According to this condition people create new forest or not try to quit have this one. So, we keep there endangering animals and also green areas perfectly if trying to harder without waste of valuable resources or not damage to them. In conclusion, trying to keep endangering animals or other all live cell varies from extinction is a spend of valuable resources is found disagree with the point of my view. I gave my opinions, reasons, points below (perfectly).
Currently
,
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some
kind of
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animals
or plants are
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endangering
for that humans
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trying
to save
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some
variation of theirs from extinction is a waste of
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valuable
resources. I disagree this statement.
Further
on, I'm going to express about this theme, this essay will
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analyse
and supply detailed sentiments
perfectly
.

Surprisingly
, human beings are
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trying
to save
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animals
due to the fact that
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endangering
day by day
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so
to deliver to the coming generation. And
also
, this actions aid to save
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changes
of nature,
especially
rotate of the cycle
smoothly
. That activity, doesn't waste of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
valuable
resources
on the other hand
, this action holds cycle.
For instance
,
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animals
which are polar bear, deer, wolf and bear
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-
this
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animals
playing a
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big
role of nature cycle.

In order to, via this way individuals
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keep
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valuable
resources
in that case
our environment is going on rising to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
sides.
For example
, to
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live
this
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animal
need to forest. According to this condition
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people
create new forest or not try to quit have this one.
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So
, we
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keep
there
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endangering
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animals
and
also
green areas
perfectly
if
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trying
to harder without waste of
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valuable
resources or not damage to them.

In conclusion
,
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trying
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
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endangering
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
or other all
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live
cell varies from extinction is a spend of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
valuable
resources
is found
disagree with the point of my view. I gave my opinions, reasons, points below (
perfectly
).
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
You can never understand one language until you understand at least two.
Geoffrey Willans

IELTS essay Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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